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Aenstus Morningray (Blood Elf Rogue)
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Player: WindZealot

Character Full name: Aenstus Morningray

Character In-game name: Aenstus

Nicknames: None.

Associations: Undercity, Silvermoon, The Horde, Various employers.

Race: Blood Elf.

Class: Rogue.

Skills and Abilities: None.

Age: 200.

Sex: Male.

Hair: Black.

Eyes: Fel Green

Weight: 103 pounds.

Height: 6'1

Usual Garments:Aenstus normally wears a set of black leather armor with red cloth bits everywhere he goes.

Personality:Aenstus behaves very professional as a bounty hunter, while he holds the completion of his bounties above all else, he also has some moral conscience. For instance, he spares a few merely because he felt they deserved better. On the other hand, when he decides to kill them, he takes satisfaction from it. He's best described as a murderous workaholic.

History: Aenstus was born to a scholar (Mother) and a soldier (Father.) His mother payed almost no regard to him, so he was mostly raised by his father. He remembers his father as a brilliant parent who encouraged him to do what was right. WHen he was thirty, his sister, Varyis was born. They got along well, though Varyis later became a shut-in primarily due to the fact that she was extremely shy, and enjoyed books rather than playing. He paid it no mind.

Soon after the first war began, he was quite interested in how many got slaughtered each day. His father reported that to his mother, who nearly tore her hair out trying to find out why her son, who was perfectly normal at first, suddenly became interested in the counts of the dead. This caused Aenstus to not only severely distrust his mother, he ended up becoming more unstable. At the time of the second war, he had started to grow slightly bored with the news of the war.

Right before Arthas launched his attack on Silvermoon, his father left to help the humans, and his mother left to study the arcane, leaving Aenstus and Varyis alone with a servant. As said before, Aenstus was easily distracted and was unable to hold a job, and the servant was in charge of the money as the mother did not trust neither Varyis or Aenstus with money. So he took to stealing, keeping a knife with him at all times, to ensure he and his sister survived. He was successful the first two times, but was caught by a guard the third. Not wanting to go to prison or be executed, he attacked the guard, aiming to slice his glaive hand off. The guard blocked it and apprehended Aenstus. He got at least 6 years in jail, but was cut short due to the Scourge attack. He managed to escape due to the lack of guards, running like the wind from all that had happened. Though with the Sunwell gone as a result, he ended up feeling the addiction to the arcane like everyone else.

He stayed hidden for 2 years afterwards, wandering the Eversong Woods and dealing with the pains of addiction, eventually getting a hold of a fel crystal and siphoning it, thusly turning into a Blood Elf. A few days afterward, he snuck back into Silvermoon, and noticed the orb near the entrance. He ended up being teleported to Tirisfal Glades. After getting lost at least three times, he met Quinus, a Forsaken that practically saved Aenstus' life. In return for his services, he was taught swordsmanship. He helped Quinus for at least three years, earning some coin in the process. He formally departed one day after deciding it was better to be a bounty hunter than a Forsaken's lapdog, and not feeling welcome in Silvermoon even then.

He became a bounty hunter in Booty Bay, becoming accustomed to the jungle, and finally securing a profession, with traveling as a second occupation.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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First off;

Please add spaces so that

Quote:Player:WindZealot

Becomes this:

Quote:Player: WindZealot

This goes for everything between, up until History:Aenstus.

Also, whatever 'Black Falcon' means, I think it's best to just describe his hair color as black. :P

Now, let's talk about content.

I feel that the Personality is written more or less like a short version of the story. How he felt during particular events is best saved for the story. What we want to know in the Personality is what he's like when you talk to him. Is he friendly? Polite? Rude or arrogant? Does he care about the law? Does he prefer killing his targets, as a bounty hunter?

Personality is mostly about describing his behavior, his beliefs and his morals and ethics.

As for the story, I wonder why he'd have to start stealing in the first place. In Silvermoon, magic is might, and if his mother was a scholar she'd most likely be very wealthy. Even if she wasn't present, it's very possible she had servants to see to her needs and take care of the children.

Then, the result of his thieving; you might want to change around a bit. Attacking an officer of the law is a very serious offense, and I can't imagine any guard willingly letting him go. My suggestion would be having him put in jail for a few years, but got busted out when the Scourge attacked.

Silvermoon guards are very experienced and use better equipment. He could absolutely have attacked the guard, meaning to hurt him, but I don't see a pickpocket being able to match a trained, armored man. At best, he could've injured him slightly, and gotten a few years for assault and theft - cut short by the Scourge invasion. He could've left for Booty Bay after that, if he still didn't feel welcome in Silvermoon.
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Made edits as told.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

i am sea-bass
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Quote:He managed to escape due to the lack of guards, running like the wind from all that had happened/

Punctuation error there!

Something that should be noted: The second war made it to Blood Elven soil, part of the forest ended up being burnt. As for the third war, after that was al said and done, all high elves [now blood elves mostly] felt a horrible withdrawal to arcane with the Sunwell gone. These addiction pains remained around until the introduction to fel, which is rather important to the Blood Elves, for it is how they got their green eyes. They received it one of two ways: Syphoning the Fel from a crystal, or being around a concentrated source of it like Silvermoon. How he dealt with the addiction as well as how his eyes shifted could be an interesting point in the characters life, though I suggestion at least minor mentions of them.
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Made a few more edits.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

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Approved [Pending Gruntship]!
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