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Aneril Amberdawn [Blood Elf Noble Warlock]
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(I feel my body is prepared.)

Player: WindZealot

Character Full Name: Aneril Amberdawn

Character In-Game Name: Aneril

Nickname(s): Ane.

Association(s): Silvermoon, House Amberdawn, The Horde.

Race: Blood Elf

Class: Warlock

Age: 127

Sex: Male

Hair: Aneril possesses reddish-orange hair, that he doesn't really bother to cut. It's the Falcon hairstyle.

Eyes: Fel Green.

Scale/Height: 1.07

Usual Garments/Armor: Aneril is almost always seen donning either robes, or some other sort of formal attire, within Silvermoon. Whilst he's traveling, he wears clothes fitting for the travel, Red Embersilk Gear, minus the kilt.

Personality: Aneril used to be a caring elf. He used to tolerate people yet, now, he is a rather abrasive sort of elf. Should he observe someone being a fool, he'll promptly inform them of how bad they're acting and hope they try making some form of correction. He also possess a strong, zealotical devotion to his House and in particular to his mother, his sisters, and to the few people he'd truly call friends, he'd stick up for them. As for his sisters themselves, he treats them rather highly. When it comes to other people, he prefers to be concise with his speech. In a drastic turn from how his older sister acts towards those in suffering, he'd only attempt to save them once. If the aggressor was against his family, he'd even attempt to kill the person, personally.

History: Aneril Amberdawn was born to Lady Nevael Amberdawn, matron of a noble family that was respected. During his childhood, he and his older sister Syrena got along rather swimmingly at first, though he eventually tired of her…antics. He was also schooled in the arcane and tailoring by Nevael just as Syrena was. During those times, he pursued the schooling of a fire mage and also requested some training in the art of the sword, in an attempt to make his mother proud. By the time his younger sister, Aurelia was born, he was a skilled fire mage and he actually got along with his younger sister.

After many decades of dealing with his sisters, exploring, and learning, the Third War came around. The Scourge marched upon Silvermoon. Nevael told her children to run and get to a safe haven alongside the rest of their family, so he did, with the rest. Over time, he felt his addiction to the magic grow, and grow, eating away. Eventually, he turned to the Fel sometime after it's introduction.

That's when he realized during the intake, that the fel's raw power covered forces that the arcane could not. Hence he continued to utilize the Fel, becoming a warlock, as well as a Blood Elf. Eventually he began to isolate himself, taking most, if not all of his belongings, and secluding himself in the Ghostlands. He began experimenting with the power granted whilst trying to keep himself above the corruption. Throughout that time period of his life, he summoned and bound three demons. The imp, Granar, the voidwalker, Thoggarth, and the most difficult one to bind, Khiinom, the felhunter. Eventually, he heard of the Cataclysm, and returned to his family, simply to keep his presence known, and to provide whatever support he possibly could, and because he hadn't seen…well, any of them in a long while. Those who still live, at least.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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Quote:In a drastic turn from how his older sister acts towards those in suffering, he'd only attempt to save them once. In fact, if the aggressor was against his family, he'd even

... Even... what? You cut your personality short, here. :)

Other than that, I don't see any real problems with this other than the history feeling a little bit bare, and overusage of commas. The latter can be fixed later.
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Edits and decapitation of commas made.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

i am sea-bass
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Realized I could have made some more edits and did so.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

i am sea-bass
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Quote: (I feel my body is prepared.)

You are not prepared.

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(1/2)
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…Glorious.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

i am sea-bass
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Removed several more commas and made a few edits.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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i am sea-bass
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Second Approval (2/2)
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Wikified!
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