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Astelan El'Zurias [Human Conjurer]
#16
Damn and Astelan works so well off of dumb luck! I'll see what I can get writ up.
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#17
We will let everyone know when the PD discussion is finished. Until then, don't do P/C active checks, as the hold-up is not on fault of the player.
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#18
Alright, got a little somethin somethin written up. Changes will be highlighted right after this post (I just thought to do it!)
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#19
I'll point out a few issues I noticed.

"as time grew", in the first paragraph in the history.

"Most of his life was devoted to learning conjuring magic and helping the Conjurers learn new magic’s", where the possessive apostrophe shouldn't be.

"It seems the orcs under estimated the humans completely", underestimated.

"He resolved to at least draw them away, and summon himself a water elemental to draw them away", draw them away is repeated.

"Any and all notions of Conjurer’s", Conjurers.
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#20
except for the last one (that doesn't seem to be there) has been fixed. Not sure where you found that?

any chance of this guy being 5'4" and... oh let's say 160-170? I'd like him to have the image of a stereotypical old person: short.
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#21
Don't see why not, plenty of people in real life at that short and heavy.
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#22
Adjusted weight and height... just one small thing

Quote:Weight: 5’7”

Height: 190 lbs

...how did no one notice this? :D
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#23
The height and weight is within the limits for humans. And shush, we saw. Honest. Hmph

Approved!
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Wikified!
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#25
Hold up. This is still undergoing discussion in the PD.
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#26
Opened back up.

I advise removing the bit about the scorpions so as to not hold up your profile. If it is passed in pd the wiki can be updated later.
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#27
Actually I don't mind. I'd rather finish up the PD first and then have it approved and wikified and what not.

Also, while I appreciate the support guys, don't get me in trouble! lol
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#28
The agreed changes have been made as discussed in the PD.

Just so we're clear! Astelan is NOT a water boy.
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Approved!

Wikified!
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