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Gregorius Marlow [Forsaken Rogue]
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Player: denisalex

Character Full Name: Gregorius Marlow

Character In-Game Name: Gregorius

Nickname(s): Poison, Venom

Association(s): The Undercity

Race: Forsaken

Class: Rogue

Skills and Abilities: Venomous Wounds- The poisons he uses to enchant his blades might put his opponents into trouble if they get wounded by them. Movement speed altering, slowing the spell casting rate, reducing the healing effects and damage over time are the basic poisons that he uses to enchant his blades.

Age: 28( deceased at 18 )

Sex: Male

Hair: Bald

Eyes: Yellow

Weight: 72kg

Height: 1,80m

Usual Garments/Armor: A green hood covers his head. He also wears spiked leather shoulderguards, green leather pants and green chestguard, as well as a pair of green gloves.

Personality: Gregorius is quite weird due to the fact that he actually talks to the big vial that contains a dark green liquid, calling it poison and blaming it for everything that happens around. He is not very social and tends to remain quiet if he finds himself into a big group. The other races don't inspire any trust to him and even his kind doesn't do that either, this leading to his "pleasure" to remain alone, with his dear poison of course.

History: In his early life, Gregorius was a well-known alchemist that lived his normal life in Lordaeron, along with his big family. Each member of his family congratulated him for his alchemy skills and he was actually proud of it because he wanted to be different from the other men in his family, who were just warriors.

Even though he was still young when the Second War began, he tried to make some potions from the herbs he collected so he would help his uncle and the other humans that fought the Orcs. He managed to come up with some basic healing potions, for he was a very talented alchemist, and always had a pleasure to mix the ingredients and discover new types of potions. Alchemy appealed to him after he saw his neighbor collect plants and mix them.

When the plague came all around Lordaeron, Gregorius was just 18 years old and tried to make a cure for the disease. Unfortunately, it soon affected a large number of humans and so, they turned into the Undead and started to kill the remaining humans. He ran to his uncle for he needed help after the Undead came into the city, but got surrounded by the mindless creatures that killed every living being they saw and he also got killed by them.

After he was raised as a minion of the Lich King, he could only serve him and kill every living being around. When Arthas got weakened, Sylvanas turned against him and broke free from the Lich King's will, along with a big group of Undead, who later named themselves as The Forsaken. Gregorius also joined Sylvanas and the other Forsaken and was glad that he finally regained his own will.

The Forsaken built a city for themselves under the ruins of Lordaeron and named it The Undercity. Gregorius felt good that he could live in the same zone as he did when he was alive and remembered his pleasure for alchemy, so he started to collect some herbs and mix them, as he once did before the plague. The herbs around Lordaeron were mainly corrupted and some were even poisonous, the fact that made Gregorius start brewing poisons for himself and for the other Forsaken.

This major change from normal alchemy healing potions to vile poisons led Gregorius to a state of madness and he had begun to talk alone, even though he had the impression he was having a dialogue with the poisons he was brewing. He started to spend more and more time collecting the ingredients for his new poison recipes and fell into loneliness as the other Forsaken were busy with their newest allies, the members of the Horde.

To this day, Gregorius is still a lone Forsaken that finds his poisons to be the best allies he could ever have.
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Quote:Each member of his family congratulated him for his alchemy skills and he was actually proud of it because he wanted to be different from the other men in his family who were just warriors.
There should be a comma after “men in his family”.

Quote:Even though he was still young when the Second War begun, he tried to make some potions from the herbs he collected so he would help his uncle and the other humans that fought the Orcs.

“Begun” should be “began.”

Quote: He managed to come up with some basic healing potions for he was a very talented alchemist and always had a pleasure to mix the ingredients and discover new types of potions.
This spot also needs some commas before and after, “for he was a very talented alchemist”.

Quote:When the plague came all around Lordaeron, Gregorius was just 18 years old and tried to make a cure for the disease, but it soon affected a large number of humans and so, they turned into the Undead and started to kill the remaining humans.
This sentence is rather run-on and could be broken down into separate sentences.

Quote:The herbs around Lordaeron were mainly corrupted and some were even poisonous, fact that made Gregorius start brewing poisons for himself and for the other Forsaken.

“Fact” should be “the fact.”

Quote:This major change from normal alchemy healing potions to vile poisons led Gregorius to a state of madness and this way he begun to talk alone, even though he had the impression he was having a dialogue with the poisons he was brewing.

“Begun” should be “had begun.” Should also drop the words “this way.”

Other than that the profile is in pretty good shape so I will give it an initial while you make the changes. :D

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Updated. :D
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Wikified!
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