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Solis Sunarrow (Blood Elf Hunter)
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Player: Saetik

Character Full Name: Solis Sunarrow

Character In-Game Name: Solis

Nickname(s): Solis

Association(s): None.

Race: Sin'dorei

Class: Hunter

Skills and Abilities:

Age: 129

Sex: Male

Hair: Black

Eyes: Fel-green

Weight: 62kg

Height: 6'1"

Usual Garments/Armor: Solis wears his usual attire which consists of white clothing with black trimmings (Gloves, boots, and tabard.) See Bandit jerkin set for a visual.


Alignment: Neutral-Good

Personality: Solis is kind and forgiving to the many enemies he has faced. He believes that everyone deserves a second chance unless they are proven that they cannot be saved. Solis is the type of person that does not believe in stereotypes and has the patience to deal with other people's problems. His motto is service before self, he is not a slacker and intends to keep it that way. He is affectionate of his friends, always thinking about that their safety matters more than himself because let's face it, no one likes to be alone.

History: Solis was raised by his older sister after having his mother die giving birth to him and his father dying due to a hunting accident. At the age of five, his sister taught him how to fashion a bow made out of wood. She also taught him how to form his own ammunition by using the resources around him. At the age of ten, he and his sister were ambushed one night as they went hunting in the woods. The sunlynx snuck up behind the two and pounced, knocking the duo to the side. His sister unloaded three arrows into the sunlynx's side, only to find a claw ripping through her.

Solis was struck by horror as it began to shred and mutilate her until she was only a pile of shredded meat and cloth. Enraged by the death, Solis threw himself to combat the sunlynx, loading arrow after arrow until finally, the beast falls dead at his feet.

As disrespect, he drew his knife and skinned the beast, taking the skin and fur as a trophy but at the cost of losing his sister. Struck by grief and anger, Solis dragged himself and the fur back to the city where he became a street rat, having no home or family to go to. He didn't even want to go to the orphanage. At the age of nineteen, he became inspired to fall in after his father's footsteps by joining the Farstriders.

The next hundred years he spent training, becoming familiar with swords and other weaponary. When the Scourage invaded, Solis awoke to the sound of screaming and yelling. Quick to react, he grabbed his weapons and fought only to find himself outnumbered and forced to retreat back to the city. When the dead finally broke through the final defenses, Solis ran. He barricaded himself and a local family inside the house, his swords drawn as the fighting neared them. When all hope was lost though, the fighting died down and after a few hours of waiting, Solis removed the barricade and looked outside, to see the city streets covered in blood.

When the Sunwell was destroyed, Solis became desperate and hungry for magic. The feeling overwhelmed him as though he was being eaten alive by a parasite and that he were growing weaker. When he took in fel he became stronger and his eyes turned to the acidic color of fel-green.


Since then, Solis had left the farstriders, feeling guilty of abandoning the people when he barricaded himself and the family. He had set out, feeling that his goal in life is offer his life to the world, helping those in need and to stop any conflicts and wars, if possible. Solis also has a side goal; to settle down once he feels as though he has done all that he could.
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Quote:Weight:62kg

Personality:Solis

When the Sunwell was destroyed, Solis became desperate and hungry for magic. The feeling overwhelmed him as though he were being eaten alive by a parasite and that he were growing weaker. When he took in fel he became stronger and his eyes turned to the acidic color of fel-green.


Since then,

Some spacing problems here, but besides that looks good. Fix this and you'll get approved!
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Fixed it. :>
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Quote:Weight:62kg

Needs a space between the colon and weight.

Initial approval!
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Thought I changed that one. Oh well, thanksies!
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Please change race to blood elf and remove the skills and abilities section. The “other” section should also be removed.

Quote:He is affectionate of his friends, always thinking about that their safety matters more than himself because lets face it, no one likes to be alone.

“Lets” should be “let's”.

Quote:As a disrespect, he draws his knife and skins the beast, taking the skin and fur as a trophy but at the cost of losing his sister.

There's a change from past tense to present tense which changes the flow of the profile. I guess I would rewrite this as:

Quote:As disrespect, he drew his knife and skinned the beast, taking the skin and fur as a trophy but at the cost of losing his sister.

Quote:The feeling overwhelmed him as though he were being eaten alive by a parasite and that he were growing weaker.

“Were” should be “was”

Quote:Since then, Solis has left the farstriders, feeling guilty of abandoning the people when he barricaded himself and the family. He sets out, feeling that his goal in life is offer his life to the world, helping those in need and to stop any conflicts and wars, if possible.

“Has” should be “had” in “had left the farstriders.” “sets out” should be “had set out.”

Other than that the profile looks pretty good.
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The changes have been made, thanks for the feedback!
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I still see the "other" section, which has been left blank.

Approved!
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To everyone who sees this: Please stop using Sin'dorei in the race section. It is requested that you use Blood Elf. Not Kaldorei, but Night Elf.

Wikified!
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