Conquest of the Horde

Alright, instead of making a new post, I'm just going to recycle this one and bump it real quick.

I need some quick RP feedback. I want to know if I'm doing anything wrong!

It's okay if you say "You're pretty good.", and things of the sort, but I'm really looking for some constructive criticism here.

Characters: Sprockey, Jethro, Kyler.

Thanks again!
-Tyler/Maelstrom

Going to go ahead and bump this up.

I really love roleplaying Targhen with you (Kyler) around. We get into rediculous arguements and stuff.

I feel really in place when roleplaying with you, because you involve me if I'm desperately out of ideas to open up a roleplay somehow.
(Sorry if this creates a weird picture, i'm not the best person in the world at explaining stuff.)