12-08-2009, 01:53 AM
12-08-2009, 01:53 AM
I would like some feedback, so if you feel the urge to say something about how I RP or any other kind of feedback, please let me know ^^.
12-08-2009, 02:15 AM
Hey, I know you! c;
I've Rped with both Grayne and Illyth, and I enjoyed the RP sessions greatly. Grayne was that shady mercenary kind of undead fellow, who didn't give a shit about the living in general, till the moment it brought him something out of it. When my character was searching for his love, you finally helped him in his search and we went all the way from Tirisfal Glades to Ratchet, on a fruitless search. I never felt as if you went out of character with Grayne, though I did have my moment that I thought you were still experimenting with his lesser personality treats.
Secondly, Illyth... Damn, what a hard time did she give El with her cold exterior xD I still have to RP with her more to get a real feel for her character, but from what I recall, you had a good idea what you wanted to do with your character.
I do want to say that there are still things you might want to work on. Capitalize names, capitalize the 'i"s; that kind of thing. I know you personally, and with that, that you're neglectful so now and then. Please try to keep an eye out for such little typos; it'll make it much easier on the eyes for others, and you'll make it feel as an automatic reflex in no time.
Furthermore, I just want to tell you that, even though there are some points you need to work on, I love RPing with your characters, and you're a great guy to talk to OOCly. And with that, I hope to do so again in the near future.
I've Rped with both Grayne and Illyth, and I enjoyed the RP sessions greatly. Grayne was that shady mercenary kind of undead fellow, who didn't give a shit about the living in general, till the moment it brought him something out of it. When my character was searching for his love, you finally helped him in his search and we went all the way from Tirisfal Glades to Ratchet, on a fruitless search. I never felt as if you went out of character with Grayne, though I did have my moment that I thought you were still experimenting with his lesser personality treats.
Secondly, Illyth... Damn, what a hard time did she give El with her cold exterior xD I still have to RP with her more to get a real feel for her character, but from what I recall, you had a good idea what you wanted to do with your character.
I do want to say that there are still things you might want to work on. Capitalize names, capitalize the 'i"s; that kind of thing. I know you personally, and with that, that you're neglectful so now and then. Please try to keep an eye out for such little typos; it'll make it much easier on the eyes for others, and you'll make it feel as an automatic reflex in no time.
Furthermore, I just want to tell you that, even though there are some points you need to work on, I love RPing with your characters, and you're a great guy to talk to OOCly. And with that, I hope to do so again in the near future.
12-08-2009, 02:15 AM
Hey, I know you! c;
I've Rped with both Grayne and Illyth, and I enjoyed the RP sessions greatly. Grayne was that shady mercenary kind of undead fellow, who didn't give a shit about the living in general, till the moment it brought him something out of it. When my character was searching for his love, you finally helped him in his search and we went all the way from Tirisfal Glades to Ratchet, on a fruitless search. I never felt as if you went out of character with Grayne, though I did have my moment that I thought you were still experimenting with his lesser personality treats.
Secondly, Illyth... Damn, what a hard time did she give El with her cold exterior xD I still have to RP with her more to get a real feel for her character, but from what I recall, you had a good idea what you wanted to do with your character.
I do want to say that there are still things you might want to work on. Capitalize names, capitalize the 'i"s; that kind of thing. I know you personally, and with that, that you're neglectful so now and then. Please try to keep an eye out for such little typos; it'll make it much easier on the eyes for others, and you'll make it feel as an automatic reflex in no time.
Furthermore, I just want to tell you that, even though there are some points you need to work on, I love RPing with your characters, and you're a great guy to talk to OOCly. And with that, I hope to do so again in the near future.
I've Rped with both Grayne and Illyth, and I enjoyed the RP sessions greatly. Grayne was that shady mercenary kind of undead fellow, who didn't give a shit about the living in general, till the moment it brought him something out of it. When my character was searching for his love, you finally helped him in his search and we went all the way from Tirisfal Glades to Ratchet, on a fruitless search. I never felt as if you went out of character with Grayne, though I did have my moment that I thought you were still experimenting with his lesser personality treats.
Secondly, Illyth... Damn, what a hard time did she give El with her cold exterior xD I still have to RP with her more to get a real feel for her character, but from what I recall, you had a good idea what you wanted to do with your character.
I do want to say that there are still things you might want to work on. Capitalize names, capitalize the 'i"s; that kind of thing. I know you personally, and with that, that you're neglectful so now and then. Please try to keep an eye out for such little typos; it'll make it much easier on the eyes for others, and you'll make it feel as an automatic reflex in no time.
Furthermore, I just want to tell you that, even though there are some points you need to work on, I love RPing with your characters, and you're a great guy to talk to OOCly. And with that, I hope to do so again in the near future.