10-19-2011, 01:40 PM
Spoiler:
After some consideration, I've decided to just take down the Torr storyline altogether, although this story will reach only a pseudo-conclusion so that "Torr" can still be encountered. Essentially, this story is meant to do the following:
1.) Explain how and why Jami has left Thunder Bluff after Thragash and the Ashrune Pact had her hide there from Torr, an unknown warlock who has been kidnapping people and draining their souls
2.) Provide some character development for the characters involved as a basis for storyline RP
3.) To avoid "auto-RPing" (RPing with myself) by, instead, letting all my ideas out at once in written story form
This is assuming that mail in WoW is sent through those floating portals you often see on some mailboxes (and how you can pick up your mail anywhere regardless of your location). If you feel this does not make sense or that there is lore explanation behind how mail works in WoW, feel free to comment.
Letters written by certain individuals are colored by the following:
Tibalan
Kapre
Torr
Bastos
Jami
Urameil
Also, feedback is appreciated.
Thank you for reading.
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1.) Explain how and why Jami has left Thunder Bluff after Thragash and the Ashrune Pact had her hide there from Torr, an unknown warlock who has been kidnapping people and draining their souls
2.) Provide some character development for the characters involved as a basis for storyline RP
3.) To avoid "auto-RPing" (RPing with myself) by, instead, letting all my ideas out at once in written story form
This is assuming that mail in WoW is sent through those floating portals you often see on some mailboxes (and how you can pick up your mail anywhere regardless of your location). If you feel this does not make sense or that there is lore explanation behind how mail works in WoW, feel free to comment.
Letters written by certain individuals are colored by the following:
Tibalan
Kapre
Torr
Bastos
Jami
Urameil
Also, feedback is appreciated.
Thank you for reading.
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The following are all written in Orcish.
Day 1
Quote:Dear boss,
My sister say I work on orcish better if I write more. I write what happen in bloodhoof village.
I find jami in village. Mother shoo her out. Jami say something bad and Mother got mad. I talk to rodber hodber hodeber darf friend back in ratchet. Darf is husband of jami. I help jami hide from warlock.
I am strong. I help jami hide from warlock and Mother. Tell darf friend jami is safe.
Your frend,
Tibalan of the earthhand
Quote:Dear Tibalan,
I am glad you've decided to practice your Orcish in written form. So far, your grammar still needs some work, as does your spelling. Ask your sister to continue to tutor you in your Orcish, and hopefully you'll improve greatly. You're doing a good job so far, and I'm very proud of you.
I am also glad you've decided to help my friends Hrodebert (that is how his name is spelled) and Jami. I have no idea what Torr wants with her. I know he wants me for the fact I am a cowardly draenei and that, somehow, he knows very private information about me. There is still much about Torr I do not know. As much as I'd like to ask of you to investigate, I really don't want you to go any further into this situation. Torr is powerful. The lot of us are guessing he's an orc, based on the fact he can lift my weight and his back is hunched. I know your people have strong disdain for practitioners of the fel, so I'm pretty sure they'll be on the alert should Torr make any attempts to get near Jami. For now, all I ask of you is to watch her and keep her company. If you hear of anything suspicious going on, please tell me. I can forward any messages you have for Hrodebert, so don't worry about writing in Common.
May the Earthmother guide your path, dear friend. Don't do anything you'll regret.
Your friend and boss,
Kapre.