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I've been part of the COTH family for nearly a year now, and would really like to know where I have done something you agreed/disagreed with and how I can improve my general roleplay.

Here I have a list of my current approved characters.

Characters:

HORDE:
- Thalarion Dawnstrider, the Silvermoon Magister.
- Validar Dawnstrider, the Blood Mage.
- Alariel Mistweaver, the Shadow Mistress.
- Andrea Blackspell, the shadow priestess.

ALLIANCE:
- Larah Evans, the frost mage.
- Elandriel Stormsong, the Priestess of Elune.
Howdy! I've only RP'd with you once, but you've got the same dang Gazelle chewing .gif as an old member (who may or may not be active anymore) I mix you up without fail.

Your posts that I've read all give me a picture that you've got a handle on things. Your spelling and grammar is neato-rific and your ability to put forward ideas is totally fine. Also, rolling a Night Elf is hot-diggity-dog material in my eyes, so OOCly I don't have any qualm.

As a little pointer ICly, I noticed Alariel was doing quite a few things in an evil manner during Rowgen's impromptu event yesterday. I think that showing rather than saying is a good method to go by - as using good and evil as adjectives makes them very esoteric to visualise in one's mind's eye. By evil, are they being unnecessarily cruel about how they do the action, or are they simply cackling and making a socially unacceptable gesture as they do it?

That tangent put aside, hopefully I can run into Elandriel soon, since Vedajo's running around Ashenvale! Not nearly enough Night Elves on this server, you magnificent man.
(08-09-2013, 05:31 AM)Maulbane Wrote: [ -> ]Howdy! I've only RP'd with you once, but you've got the same dang Gazelle chewing .gif as an old member (who may or may not be active anymore) I mix you up without fail.

Your posts that I've read all give me a picture that you've got a handle on things. Your spelling and grammar is neato-rific and your ability to put forward ideas is totally fine. Also, rolling a Night Elf is hot-diggity-dog material in my eyes, so OOCly I don't have any qualm.

As a little pointer ICly, I noticed Alariel was doing quite a few things in an evil manner during Rowgen's impromptu event yesterday. I think that showing rather than saying is a good method to go by - as using good and evil as adjectives makes them very esoteric to visualise in one's mind's eye. By evil, are they being unnecessarily cruel about how they do the action, or are they simply cackling and making a socially unacceptable gesture as they do it?

That tangent put aside, hopefully I can run into Elandriel soon, since Vedajo's running around Ashenvale! Not nearly enough Night Elves on this server, you magnificent man.

Thanks for the feedback, Maulbane! The reply definitely made me smile so early in the day.

Concerning Alariel, Alariel is the type of character that is pure evil inside, but cloaks it by being sweet and friendly. This is simply her mechanism to get closer to someone, just to strike them down when they least expect them. She has made a few friends, though.
Bump. (The feedback threads seem to be popular today)