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Fenlan Sunshot [Blood elf Ranger]
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Player: Stealthscout.

Character Full Name: Fenlan Sunshot.

Character In-Game Name: Fenlan.

Nicknames: Fen.

Associations: Silvermoon, Dawn's reach, Farstrider's rangers.
Race: Blood elf.

Class: Hunter.

Skills and Abilities: Farstrider training: After training with the farstriders for years he learned how to craft arrows and bows, as well as advance survival and first aid.

Age: 219.


Sex: Male.

Hair: Brown.

Eyes: Fel green.

Weight: 153 Ibs.

Height: 6'1.
Usual Garments/Armor: When in jungle or wood areas he is seen in green camo, and when in snowy areas he is in white camo, he walks with well-crafted bow and arrows.

Personality: Fenlan is silent and shy, he likes stay to max three word answers, and he doesn't start any conversations, unless those are his close friends or he really has too, he takes everything too serious; however, from the inside he is a more sensitive person making him easily offended. He is afraid to say the wrong word and make the person go away.

He is afraid of animals, he doesn't like to do anything with them or be near them, unless he has too.

History: Being born to a Farstrider family, he was always surrounded with animals. He always liked to play with them and be around them, he was a real 'nature' kid. His parents loved him and he was happy. As he grew up he preferred to be alone in the wild.

As he grew his liking to animals sent him to his way and he decided to train with being a falconier, there he trained and met his true friend- Erohis, they were a good team and had fun together, until his liking to animals stopped because of a failed test, he got traumatized because the bird attacked him and almost killed him. He quit the falconier training and went to Ranger training, because the bow was his second best friend.

He decided to become a Ranger for the farstriders, he was trained with his bow, and his keen senses helped him become an expert marksman, while training he did not sever his connection with his dear friend, he and Erohis stayed close friends.

The years have passed and the training got harder and harder, he was assigned to all kinds of missions and ranked up in the Farstrider's ranking. He was sent to more stealthy missions, learning how to be stealthy and all the survival techniques, he learned to be calm as water and silent as a rock.

The war has come, he was sent to the front lines, and his connection with Erohis has severed. He fought in flanking missions but most of them failed because the scourge were too strong, he retreated and went to hiding with his squad until another message would come in to tell them what to do, not a single word came, until the start of the new week.

He got out, and tears were in his eyes, Quel'thalas was ruined, and the sunwell as well, he felt the connection has left him and he paled, he went with his team and cleared a few scourge remnants, he helped the survivors recover with his team, trying to help as much as possible, until new orders will arrive to his ears.

The fel method came to his ears and he used it as soon as he can, his eyes turned green and his skin turned brighter a bit, he blinked as it worked but he felt the side-effects kick in, he felt nauseates or headaches for the first month, but everything cleared up. He re-joined the farstriders and continued his work with them.

After eight years of helping, he decided to become a cartographer and start his hobby. He left the Farstriders and he felt ready to explore the world with all the training he got, while in booty bay, he stumbled across his old friend, Erohis, while not talking for eight years, the two have to catch up, and because of that he joined her on journey with helping the Dawns reach, the two have re-formed their team and ready to face everything.
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I can't approve this just yet. Mostly because I'm not too comfortable with the 'divisions' and 'branches' of the Farstriders. While there might be different skill-sets for different Farstriders to use, I don't think they have divisions other than 'you are a Farstrider, here is your officer, good luck'.

I'll wait for another staff member's opinion, or you could just get rid of all mention of 'divisions' and 'branches'.
Quote:[8:53AM] Cassius: Xigo is the best guy ever. he doesn't afraid of anything.
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Got read of the divisions and branches!
I actually thought there would be stuff like that, but because they are not mentioned.. I guess they don't need to be there.
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Quote:He joined the the other branch of the farstriders- the Rangers

Just edit that and we're cool.
Quote:[8:53AM] Cassius: Xigo is the best guy ever. he doesn't afraid of anything.
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Homie, we're cool, I fixed the problem.
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(03-03-2013, 05:00 AM)Stealthscout Wrote: Being born at to a Farstrider family, he was always surrounded with animals, he always liked to play with them and be around them, he was a real nature kid, his parents loved him and he was happy, as he grew up he was alone, preferring to be alone at the wild.

In your history, I noticed that you use a lot of commas and have a few grammatical errors. And your paragraph becomes a very long, long sentence. You can break up the lines with a few periods to make it flow more.

Quote:Being born to a Farstrider family, he was always surrounded with animals. He always liked to play with them and be around them, he was a real 'nature' kid. His parents loved him and he was happy. As he grew up he preferred to be alone in the wild.

I would suggest maybe rereading your profile out loud to notice any oddities in grammar or parts where you can break the history into different sentences.
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Thanks for the advice! I fixed the problem.
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Quote:[8:53AM] Cassius: Xigo is the best guy ever. he doesn't afraid of anything.
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I am confused by this plus.
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Wikified!
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