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Jeannavai McCarthy [Human Warrior]
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http://www.conquestofthehorde.com/Thread...light=Jean

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Player: Cressy

Character Full Name: Jeannavai McCarthy

Character In-Game Name: Jean

Nickname(s): Jean, Vai, 'Bazinga! That is one huge Wooo-man!'

Association(s): The Alliance

Race: Human

Class: Warrior

Abilities and Skills: Jean is efficient with swords, but more often is seen using her fists.

Age: Thirty-five

Sex: Female

Hair: Black

Eyes: Hazel

Weight: Two eighty-five

Height: Six feet Two inches

Appearance

Tends to wear leathers; when working, she wears mail/plate/leather combo and always has swords at hands.

Personality

Jean has an extremely dominant, narcissistic, blunt personality at first glance. She boasts herself up every chance she gets and tends to spend great amounts of energy making everyone think and feel the same way. Though, if a person were to get close to her, they would see and understand her faults. She is very unsure of herself at times and sometimes questions her ability to do things. She also becomes socially awkward with men she has attractions for, making her say things that should be kept to her self and makes everything into a competition with them.

History

Born and raised in the wonderful area of Southshore, Jean was the youngest and only girl of six children. Her parents Anita and Gregor, both worked in the noble houses, mother as a cook and father as a labourer in the farm. Her siblings and herself would help out for a few copper a day with their parents, either within the house or the field. After work was over, her brothers would often take her out into the city where they would play with the other children. With different , clashing personalities came fights. Jean was almost always first to throw a punch and that punch usually ended it.

Eventually, it had become apparent to her parents of the scraps. They made the decision to offer her up for more labour intensive work, hoping that it might teach her a lesson. Oh did it, she enjoyed the work more than she thought. Working in the fields caused her to become stronger and tougher in fights with the other kids.

Her time on the farm moved on, and at the fruitful age of sixteen her father sat her down to have a 'good talkin’ to'. He was displeased with how she had turned out and voiced it to her thoroughly.

“Ya' be a girl! Quit doin’ mens jobs ya hur? I ain't want ya ta become anothuh one o’ teh boys! I wanted tuh murry ya off tuh a nice family! No one wants tuh be wit' a girl like ya'!”

The thought of letting her parents down for another day, was too much for her to handle. Devastated, Jean packed what little money she was able to save, a change of clothing and two swords she had won in a fight and went to the majestic cities to the South. She would make pit stops, taking up work where she could to continue to pay for her adventures. From time to time, she would get into a fight and would have to quickly pick up her things to leave.

When she'd come across areas stricken by the wars, she would take her time and try and help where she could. Whether that was carrying lumber, transporting injured or even making hot food, she'd do it. Even though she wasn't confident enough to enlist, she tried to do something.

At one point, she found refuge in Ironforge, slipping into the society easily. Their strong will, love of booze, great food and dense muscles seemed to hit home for her. Even though she has moved on, she commonly goes back there.
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Yo! Change the semicolon after "she has attractions for" in the personality to a comma. Also, I'd like to see some mention of the second and third wars in the history - they were very important events and, as she was travelling at the time, would have had some effect on her.

Aside from that, everything's solid!
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Updated!
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Approved!

Wikified!
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