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Julie Wildthorn [Worgen Druid]
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Player: Stealthscout.

Character Full Name: Julie wildthorn.

Character In-Game Name: Julie.

Nicknames: Lily.

Associations: Ashwatch vigil.

Race: Worgen.

Class: Druid.

Skills and Abilities:

Flowery: Julie likes picking up flowers and doing all kinds of nice things with them. Like: Crowns, and such. She also knows a bit of alchemy and the aspects of nature in healing, from her Druidic training.

Spear mastery: After living in the wild for so long, she learnt how to use the spear.

The law of nature: Hunt or be hunted. Julie is a predator at heart. Knowing how to survive nature itself, because she spent all those years in the forest.

Age: 31

Sex: Female.

Hair: Light brown.

Eyes: Green.

Weight: 123 Ibs (human) 202 (Worgen)

Height: 5'3 (Human) 6'8 (Worgen)

Usual Garments/Armor: Julie is a simple woman; she walks with a over sized robe. In case she will need to shift and thus it will fit her. Vine accents her robe. Julie is barefoot and most likely not wearing nothing below her robe besides leaves and vines.

Personality: Julie is calm, precise, and merciless at times. She is a vicious, and may be like an animal in times. The only thing she cares about are the forests and her druid training, the leaves and the trees. Julie dedicates her life to aid the Kaldorei in winning back the forest.

Julie tends to lash out with remarks if interrupted with her work, but if she has to 'act' nice, because she thinks she has to be nice to the kaldorei, they did help her after all.

Besides that, she would rest upon a tree or go pick up flowers and make a crown of it if she could. Julie is grumpy towards human beings, and feels 'connected' to the forest but her 'connection' to human beings is very off. Julie like walking in worgen form more, she thinks it makes her become one with the beast.
Julie shifts back to human if she is needed to communicate or rest.

History: Julie Wildthorn. First born of her family of harvest witches. Julie was a cheerful girl, filled with energy. She liked skipping in the fields of grass and picking flowers, making crowns for her mother and father. Unbeknownst to Julie, when she was only one years old the First War began.

Upon reaching the age of six, Julie took to decorating the house and helping her mother with housework. With her unharnessed energy, Julie flitted about the town helping anybody and everybody with a smile; it was something she enjoyed.

At the age of seven, the Second War began. Alarmed by the change in her environment when the Gilnean Wall was built, Julie felt herself filled with fear. She didn't know what to do and began to grow restless, frequently visiting the forest just outside of her home. She felt as though the forest held the peace she needed.

Julie grew into her teenage life. The civil war was just lurking around. Everyone had a feeling like something just needs to pop and then everything will go down. Julie hated that feeling. She tried lighting up the mood by doing cheerful events like a festival made with people who are willing to cooperate.

Julie continued helping the people, she learned how to become a harvest witch,, and thus she was able to raise crop for the simple folk. She became a harvest witch to continue her family tradition of harvest witches. She did it because she felt she must continue this family tradition of druidism. She started off with making flowers and grow, and from that evolved to the magics she knows today.

Someone made the bubble pop. It was too quick. It was a normal day and suddenly someone flipped a table, gun shot, swords kissed, and shields bashed. Julie ran away to the forest, because the forest seemed like her last resort. She felt safe in nature, because she is an harvest witch, she feels like it is her neutral habitat. The clumsy girl with her clumsy robe, fearing the outcome of what may happen to her family.

Julie decided to live in the forest, where she can protect herself, because she knew it that good. Julie made a spear out of rock and wood, and lived by growing some apples or seeds for herbs and by hunting animals brutally. Her life while being in the woods was hard, her personality changed, and she slowly closed upon herself, only having the nature for her, she grew to like it, just it. She learnt it all from being a child and her druid training provided her of more knowledge.

Julie also expanded her knowledge by making all kinds of traps so she can capture food even when she sleeps, if she encounters an enemy she just runs away. The forest being used as cover.

The worgen came to her first, unfortunately she was out of the city. Julie could only defend herself with her meek spear. Julie ran away, but while she ran away she got bite at the shoulder. She healed it, but it seemed to affect her. By the time she turned worgen the Night elves got to her, and helped her.

After seeing a Druid shape shift. She showed him her magic, and asked him to teach her the ways of the druid of the claw. The Druid agreed after thinking about the subject for a couple of days. The two set out to Ashenvale. So they could train and help the Ashwatch Vigil.
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(05-24-2013, 09:54 AM)Stealthscout Wrote: At the age of seven the second war happened. Julie was terrified. They walls were built and Julie was confused with her surroundings. Not knowing what to do. Julie decided to run to the forest, and hang out there. Liking it there.

Julie grew into her teenage life. The civil was just lurking around. Everyone had a feeling like something just needs to pop and then everything will go down. Julie hated that feeling. She tried lighting up the mood by doing cheerful events like a parade made with people who are willing to cooperate.

Julie continued helping the people by learning how to become a druid of the harvest, making crop grow. She started off with making flowers and grow, and from that evolved to the magics she knows today.

Someone made the bubble pop. It was too quick. It was a normal day and suddenly someone flipped a table, gun shot, swords kissed, and shields bashed. Julie ran away to the forest, the clumsy girl with her clumsy robe, fearing the outcome of what may happen to her family.

Julie decided to live in the forest, where she can protect herself, because she knew it that good. Julie made a spear out of rock and wood, and lived by growing some apples or seeds for herbs. She learnt it all from being a child and her druid training provided her of more knowledge.

Ohai there, Stealthscout. While your profile isn't really wrong, or lorebreaking (that I can tell), I would like to touch on this section here, if you'll hear me out.

I have to wonder what forest Julie ran to at age seven. I really, really hope it wasn't the Blackwald. Even before the worgen were unleashed, it was a nasty, twisted little place. Though, even if it were a normal forest, how is a seven year old going to survive?

Second--I don't quite understand the parade thing. The Civil War took many lives, brother against brother. Julie's solution is to throw parades, then run away into the woods when things get too hard? Gilneans are a resilient, stubborn people. The last thing they like is being told what to do, even by their own brothers.

Third--the Order of the Harvest is a deep, familial (of the family) tradition, and likely matriarchal. While many types of people adhere to it, you just don't walk into it. These people have been driven to the edges of society by centuries--millenia even--of oppression by the church and the academies of arcane magic. It is also incorrect to call them druids, though the nature (hurr, pun) of the magic is the same. And, I would totally link you my sources, but the site they're on is down. When it pops back up, I'll post them here, on in Skype.

Fourth--why does she keep running to the forest? If she adheres so strongly to the notion of "survival of the fittest" why does she not fight tooth and nail for her family? A person so skittish would not survive in the woods of Gilneas.

So, yeah. Those're my main issues. Again, the profile isn't quite wrong or lore breaking, as much of Harvest Witchery is open to interpretation. So, take this as you will.

Edit: Here's a cached version of my sources! http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/se...ent=safari
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First- About the forest, it is not blackwald, no. It is a simple, small forest. not to many wild life in it. Now how she survived it you say? I forgot to add.. a couple of details.. to that it seems.

Two- She did it -before- the civil war. That is, she tried to prevent it.. by cheering people up! didn't work so much.. now did it? xD

Third- I will... get to that.

Fourth- She is a nature girl, even being a druid makes it stronger in sense. She feels safer in the forest. Stronger, she doesn't feel like she can fight -out- of the forest.
That is that! thanks for telling me!
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Fixed!
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...They were not called Druids of the Harvest for a reason. Heck, druids weren't even known to the people of the Eastern Kingdoms until they made contact with the Night Elves. They're called Harvest Witches, or Witches of the Harvest, or the Order of the Harvest.

As for the rest... First off, you went "The law of nature: Hunt or be hunted. Julie is a predator at heart. Knowing how to survive nature itself, because she spent all those years in the forest."

And yet in her personality you describe her as "calm, considerent, and carefree at times." There's an obvious discrepancy in that nature tends to be uncaring, vicious and deadly. A predator does not care for its prey. It follows necessity.

Additionally, the parade thing... Parades in Medieval times were generally officiated by nobility and royalty. They were a way to display armed forces and the like. I think you might want 'festival' rather than parade. Harvest Witches would sometimes organize festivals for agrarian bits of Gilnean society.

Another discrepancy is... well, living in nature takes a hell of a lot of practicality and nerves. By that I mean, no, you wouldn't wear clumsy clothing. You'd wear whatever protects you from the elements and lets you run, climb and move freely, because speed is of the essence. When humanity lived in communion with nature IRL, hunters would sometimes have to run for up to four hours a day, continuously, without breaks, to catch prey, to feed themselves. It's a really, really tough choice, and you end up marked by it psychologically(social skills suffer, you grow jaded to killing animals, etc.) and physically(scars, a more muscular frame, etc.) for life. Suffices to say, a human being that has been put through the wilderness and back will not end up something clumsy and cute.

Also, you have odd wording throughout the profile. Not completely wrong, just... odd. Might want to have a native speaker or someone well-versed in English help out with that, if you feel like it.
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Changed her personality!
Plus, this nice person @Rini read my history, and helped me correct it! Thanks a lot! :P
This profile is may change soon. Stay tuned!
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Just give us a bump when the changes have been made!
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Okay! decided not to do any changes! added a few thing to work along flammos's judgement!
I hope it suffices!
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Heyo, stealthscout...o. I'm thinkin' we're gonna need a few more changes anyway, heh.

Quote:Julie Wildthron. First born of her family of druids of the harvest, also only born.

Kerbam, double whammy right off the bat. Y'spelled yer name wrong, kiddo! Flammos also asked you to call them Harvest Witches, I think. Also, the phrasing in that second sentence is a little wonky; shift it to "She was born Julie Wildthorn, first and only child of her family of Harvest Witches" if ya like!

Wait wait. Brakes.

Quote: and later for her newly brother or sister.

Is she the only child, or not? Also, this'd be newly born, I think?

Quote:The civil was just lurking around.

Civil wot?

Quote: how to become a druid of the harvest, making crop grow. She did it because she felt she must continue this family tradition of druidism.

Moar.

Quote: animals brutaly.

Brutally.


Still wearing that oversized robe flammos spoke of earlier. Any reason to keep it in?

Hit these up and let us know.
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ddioaskdsadoisadksa I added a few things, and then I decided to remove them, so I just pressed cancel.. I think I accidently made the changes.. oh my, going to fix it!

Fixed! anywho!
The over sized robes are the part of her main appearance! she wears them to fit in them perfectly well when she shifts to Worgen form! :P
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Quote: making crowns for her mother and father, and later for her newly brother or sister.

YOU HAVE FAILED ME FOR THE LAST TIME, ADMIRAL STEALTHSCOUT!

Nah, but you still haven't fixed that line, nor clarified if she actually has siblings. They're never mentioned, but you still call her the firstborn.

Fair enough on the robes!
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*takes nuclear power plant. Sets on boom, BOOOM*
I SWEAR I FIXED THAT, I SWEAR ON MY LIFE AS A BOX ELF (Fixed)
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It seems a bit weird that she would choose to run into the forest instead of trying to go somewhere else in the city/town she was in. Gilneans didn't seem to be much for surrendering the comforts of their lives, after all.
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(05-30-2013, 08:56 PM)Scout Wrote: It seems a bit weird that she would choose to run into the forest instead of trying to go somewhere else in the city/town she was in. Gilneans didn't seem to be much for surrendering the comforts of their lives, after all.

They weren't, being the richest of the Alliance nations. But, there's a difference between a noble, the common folk, and Harvest Witches.
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Still, abandoning society seems a bit weird. Perhaps you could at least elaborate?
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