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Laeris Duskgazer [Night Elf Demon Hunter]
Player: WindZealot

Character Full Name: Laeris Duskgazer

Character In-Game Name: Laeris

Nickname(s): Fool, Hunter, Gazer.

Association(s): Herself, Darnassus (Loosely.)

Race: Night Elf

Class: Demon Hunter/Rogue: OOCly

Skills and Abilities:

The Demon Hunter is surrounded by a wreath of flames, damaging all targets within 5 yards.

Mana Burn
The Demon Hunter channels Demonic energy within themselves which causes Spellcasters to take damage from their own mana reserves, burning them internally.

Engulf Blade
The Demon Hunter channels their Immolate ability, which causes their weapon(s) to become engulfed in flames, causing fire damage to enemies.

Drain Demon Soul
The Demon Hunter may channel the lifeblood of a Demon to heal themselves and restore energy/mana/rage.

Tainted Fireball
The Demon Hunter may hurl a fireball at his/her target, inflicting lots of fire damage and some shadow damage.

Age: 351

Sex: Female

Hair: Laeris keeps her rather long, emerald hair tied up in some form of ponytail or braid. Usually just braided tails.

Eyes: Laeris' eyes used to be the typical silver of a female night elf. Then she cut them out and just…binded her eyes to a blindfold.

Scale/Height: 1.04

Usual Garments/Armor: Liraeis usually wears some form of green or earthen-toned garment. Be it leather, or cloth. Of course, never, would she be seen without a blindfold. Hinting at her occupation.

Personality: Laeris has forcefully molded herself into what she believes is ideal for a Demon Hunter. She is cold, ruthless, brooding, and anti-social, to the point where she just looks for a quick escape if she encounters anyone, attempts to systematically kill every demon she possibly could kill, and knows she can, and to the few she interacts with? They get almost nothing, and they would have to be a very close friend to get a conversation going. Even before she underwent her trials, she has had difficulty interacting with others, something she couldn't possibly care less about, just as she could care less about being considered a monster. Yet, despite all of this, she could just as well try being social as well as being anti-social, and some of her former self still exists beneath her shell.

History: Laeris Nightgazer was born to Banor and Elyna Moonwatcher, in Ashenvale several hundred years ago, and almost as soon as she could walk, she encountered a hurdle. She couldn't really mingle with the other children with ease. In fact, she had a great difficulty doing so. So she merely only interacted with them, if she truly had to. She just went about her business, otherwise. Eventually, adulthood rolled about, and she became a sentinel, like any other female in her society. Her social ineptitude had somewhat helped her during her training, in a sort of, "Less people to talk to, more chance to better myself," sort of way.

However, the Third War, it happened around that time. Many of the people she considered acquaintances had died. However, three people that she had managed to actually befriend died during that time. Their losses, they pushed Laeris over what little edge there was. So afterwords, she simply left. She took her glaive with her, and she simply wandered Kalimdor, and eventually began to develop a taste for the hunt of the demon. And then…

She found her. She found a peculiar woman, bearing a blindfold, body adorned in tattoos, and bearing warglaives, using the fel against the fiends. This had interested the elf. She attempted to follow this mystery elf. Eventually, she caught up and was promptly attacked, and in her curiosity, nearly killed by a demon. Eventually, in the midst of her struggle, the hunter had heard her cries, and, after viewing her struggling with vigor for a while, eventually finished the demon in one fireball. Laeris, however, she was a mess. The Hunter, who's name was Awesidiel, simply tended to Laeris' wounds. The wounded elf managed to get out the fact that she wanted to know exactly what she was utilizing, and if possible, learn to do that as well, out into the air, and Awes, having viewed her will, informed her of the risks, and effects of the trials that would be imposed upon her if she continued with this…mad intention. She accepted.

So it began…

The first trial, the physical test. Awesidiel was to attempt to hunt Laeris down, over the course of several months. The elf-in-training was only to have her wits, and a head-start of a couple of hours. The hunt itself, it was arduous, it was long, it was taxing, and the sure fear of Awesdiel happening to sight her prey was enough to make Liraeis discard almost all her emotion, sans rage. The Long Hunt, as both mentor and student later referred to it as, spanned several of the lands within the continent of Kalimdor, and at the end of it all, Liraeis was suffering from fatigue of all sorts. She collapsed onto the ground in Feralas, far from the settlement, and anything else. Awes found her unconscious form, eventually, and when she woke up, in a cave, with her mentor, Laeris simply remained silent.

Awesdiel Gladefeather was pleased, very pleased, that day.

When Awes decided it was sufficient time for the second trial, a written exam, she delegated a journal containing details upon all the demons she had encountered, and was given till the end of the month to study off of it. Eventually, the day of the exam rolled around. She had barely passed, with 92% of it.

Awesdiel had another task for Laeris. Find a demon of her choosing, slay it, retrieve it's blood…or it's heart, and return it to her. She did not explicitly state what she would receive for this, other than the fact that she was going to require training, with the warglaives. At last, the weapons with which she had associated her master with for a long while. She almost immediately proved to be a natural with them, and Awes, pleased with the progress her pupil had shown, dispatched her to find…a felguard. Knowing how far this would take her, Awes bid her pupil farewell, and entrusted her with a set of glass vials for the demons blood.

However, Laeris not only found and killed the felguard, albeit suffering several wounds in the process, she had filled the vials with it's blood, and cut out it's heart, as well. She returned to Awes, who was, for once, elated. Her reward was revealed. The tattoos that Awes bore. The tattoos of Control, and they were inscribed onto her with the blood of the Felguard as ink, granting her power, demonic, corrupt power. Laeris fainted, and upon waking up, was caught up by fel sickness. Upon recovery, Awesdiel's words, to be simply put, summarized the next trial.

"You are to gouge out your own eyes, with this dagger that I have prepared specifically for you. You'll likely fall into a coma. If you succeed…you'll be granted sight without eyes. The Cursed Vision."

Fall into a coma, she did. Awaken with the sight, she did. Soon, her final trial, hunt down a demon hunter who had fallen from grace, and drain the blood from said hunter's heart into her mouth, was delegated.

This task, it took a while to even sight a demon hunter. It took an even longer time to notice, it was a male blood elf. Ah, how quickly Laeris had emerged from her hiding spot. How quickly the fight had erupted into slinging fireballs. However, eventually Laeris managed to gain the upper hand, she slew the blood elf, ripped his heart out, and drained it into her mouth.

"It is finished."
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

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i am sea-bass

Character Full Name:Laeris Duskgazer

Character In-Game Name:Laeris

Nickname(s):Fool, Hunter, Gazer.

Association(s):Herself, Darnassus (Loosely.)

Race:Night Elf

Class:Demon Hunter/Rogue:OOCly

Fix spacing. Should be a space between the : and whatever you put next to it.

Quote: ...

When she's not talking, you shouldn't use ellipses. Using ... during a conversation? Sure, but do not use it when just describing her history or whatever else normally.

Quote:However, eventually Laeris managed to gain the upper hand. Slay the blood elf. Rip his heart out. Drained it into her mouth.

Fix the tensing. You want past tense.
Edits made. Also, Mathias, that moment when Dr. Light.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

i am sea-bass
Hi there, Windzealot.

Quote: , to the point where she just looks for an if she encounters anyone

Think we've got a missing word there!

You've also still got a bunch of those ellipses hanging around that Mathias mentioned. They should be pretty easy to spot!

Aside from that, I'd like to see you give us a bit more of her personality. I want to see more than just "I am cold, quiet, and hunt demons."
More edits.
Perhaps it is your imperfection that which grants you free will, that allows you to persevere against cosmically calculated odds. You prevailed where the Titans' own perfect creations have failed.

- Algalon, The Observer

[Image: tumblr_m00qfdoBWr1qd87hlo1_500.gif]

i am sea-bass
Second approval! (2/2)


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