Feedback. It's AWESOME.

[Etmosril]

So since I've been around a few months, it's time for me to put up a feedback thread too!

I'd like feedback on three main characters; with anything you'd like to comment or add.

Lene
Sanya
Kenarith (She'd be trouble to give feedback on, though. What an unrealistic little monster.)

In addition, I'd like people to tell me what they think of me as a player (and definitely tell me if I'm too obnoxious). I appreciate the honesty and the feedback.

Thankies.

[Daginae]

Your fine with me and my alt Dedry so, no complaints from me.

[ptdapen]

I will bite you.. that is all...

Not really. I've enjoyed RPing with you a lot. Some of Lene's little actions conflict with Calle's stuck-up attitude quite beautifully. Oh and Sanya is absolutely vicious. Very nice.

......

*bites*

[teege]

You know we have fun. Crazy DK.

[flammos200]

/cracks knuckles. Oh boy. Let's start with your RP of Lenny(Lene).

Lene, at first glance, is your average, no-nonsense Blood Knight with a love for plants. Now, that's fine and dandy, -but-, she carries a depth that keeps on going... and going... aaaand, yes, you guessed it, going. It's a pretty amazing thing, the way her simple exterior hides a complex inner personality. She as a character, I would class as active, rather than reactive. As in, she -can- take initiative, despite oftentimes building on the RP of others, keeping things flowing nicely.

Lene, however, I find a -bit- unchanging. This may very well be your intention, as to keep true to your original view of her as a char, but still, shifting opinions once in a while isn't a bad thing. Then again, she may just be stubborn. Also, she needs to relax sometime, and(Yes, I know you have this planned) she should cut loose for a short while. Give the girl a break, she deserves it. Else, she'll probably snap(It's a wonder she hasn't. Then again, with that workfaise...). Anyhow. I very much like what's grown between her 'n Arlyn.

/e runs off, picking flowers and nomming Sanguis-head cookies.


Sanya! Now, see, I wish I had RP-ed with her more, as I base my feedback on personal, face-to-face interaction ingame. That's a minor point, though. An interesting factor is her predatorial nature. What I mean by that, is that she preys on the weak and respectts the strong. That's something one does not often find in an elf, much less in a Death Knight. I find few to no flaws in her, despite her not losing fights, she -does- end up injured, and in trouble, so, no faults there.

I must not show fear, or they will eat me.(Or however that went.)


Kenarith! Only met her once. But she is humor personified... I like how her outward appearance reflects her outward personality. I'm wondering if her inward nature is ever brought to light in public, or if she just plays the kid. Anyhow, this wondering is a gerat thing. Because you know you're doing something right when you make people think. And she does that. Makes 'em think 'n laugh... either that, or I have a very twisted sense of humor. Kenarith's definitely an Active character. She starts things. /nod

Wheeee~


Sevith! Because I got to RP with her. Sevith plays the ghoul part well. Now, while she brings another natural fun-factor, it is also gruesome. And gruesome is good. She's a -ghoul-. Living dead. It's supposed to be like that. Sure, some people might complain, but really? Anyhow, her curiosity in regards to eyes is something I find interesting to bring up. Why? Because, Kaldorei have naturally glowing eyes. She's a ghoul. She lost her 'glow'. And DKs have glowy eyes. Perhaps that's what led to it. A minor note is that her personality reflects that of a crow. The attraction to shiny objects, the peering at things birdishly, and so on.

Sevith's hard to classify as a character, mostly because she's undead, and under a DK's command. She's probably balanced between active and reactive, seeing her taking initiative with the blue crystal in Winterspring, for example.

Awesomepunch.


Toodles.

[flammos200]

All right. Here I go again. /cracks knuckles.

Let's see... I think I'll start off with Lene.

Lene is, quite honestly, my favorite of your characters. She's great fun, she's srsfaise when it's called for, her reactions are realistic and very, very lifelike, and she's well-developed. Now, I love the way she works around Arlyn. It's adoracute.(I'm on a roll as far as invented words goes, it seems) And another thing I appreciate about her is that she always adds something to the table. There's always that tiny little something that she does or brings or has with her, or did earlier in the day that just makes things seem very, very real, and contribute tons to immersion.

Lene does(And I'm assuming here. I may be wrong, but hey.) take a lot of memory and attention to RP properly, though, huh? And frankly, everyone gets stumped over details sometimes, so, I can't really say that's a negative point, as I am -more- than satisfied with your(Our?) RP on her thus far.

All in all, between the adoracute(Again. I love that word.) chemistry between her and Arlyb, and the sense of constant 'something new' that she brings, I find her a very enjoyable experience to RP with, and I look forward to every moment of our adventures together.

...Does something smell like tea to you? /sniffs the air.


Taiga. You know how in stories, you have villains and villains, right? Well, there are the clearly evil people, wanton rampage, subversive plotting, conspiracy, assassination, you name it. But Taiga... is the epitome of it.

Now, imagine it this way. If a sociopath was tinted with an obsession for power, and Death Knight-hood, adding in a sprinkle of sadism, a few tablespoons of perversion and shaken(not stirred), she would be the resulting brew, though not before adding a topping of Mastermind-like evil.

The good, of her, is that she's smart - and shows it. It's RP-ed very well, and the point comes across clearly. A negative point on her would be that she doesn't seem(Or perhaps I'm not seeing past the xanatos gambit here.) to be using all the tools at her disposal. Is she? Hmm. The aura of 'What will she do next?' is something present in her.

Concluding, she's a much-needed breath of fresh air in a world all-too-permeated by half-arsed villains.

Quite the beautiful statue, isn't it?...


Back on track, we move on to Sanya.

Sanya I haven't seen much of since she got Steamwarrior-ified.(Though, honestly, that may not be a pleasant experience, depending on the circumstances. Heheheh...) Up to then, though, and out of her posts, she's on a downward spiral.

It's... a strange thing to go through what she has. I mean... I still cling to my view that she deserves a little bit of happiness(In the generally accepted sense of the word.) once in a while, but her actual story, her concept, is a thing of terrible beauty. It's one of the things you wear a rueful smile to. Like sunsets.

Anyhow, I want to see more of her sometime. I really do. Totally not a dirty insinuation... /shudder

Corruption and Catharsis, huh?


Up next, I pick Sehi and Valaia. Both of them. Because I can...

Sehi is... Sehi. Manipulative mage, and lover of puzzles and games. Bets too. Heheheh... Still, -how- she manages to remain apparently 'good' is a thing of wonder to me - And I think it puzzles Arlyb too, mind. After all, are we not taught that power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutly?

Moreover, I find her and Valaia to be a fairly amusing pair. Though, it -is- interesting how Valaia's demeanor shifts slightly around Sehi, as opposed to how she acts when around Arlyn and Lene only.

Valaia herself is... well, truly Arlyn's sister, huh? With a little bit of a cruel tinge, that the other tactfully ignores, but hey. They're so much adorable packed in one place that I find it a miracle our internet didn't explode. Collectively.


But that's all for now. I might be coming over with more soon. /peers at Teremun, Kenarith and Thani. -Searchingly-.