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[Binkleheimer]

Alright, some time ago, I requested some feedback for Wilhelm.
I obviously got the feedback and his RP moved out of the rut and went forward.

Now then, I want feedback for my characters in general.
I want to know everything people have to say about them, what they like and dislike.
I would also like some opinions on where you see them going and what you think would be good for them.

Lastly, I'd also like people to be, well, blunt. This isn't a pat on the back thread, this is here so I know what I need to work on. Want to say something? Great, but be honest about it.

There is one catch though, I don't want anything about Shadovarn posted in this thread. If you have something to say about him, PM it to me.

Character List:
Wilhelm Grimsong
Del Delamore
Charlie
Narm Felfury
Necronium
and Shadovarn.


(Yes, I know there is one for Wilhelm up-ish. However, that one was tooled specifically for the rut I was in with that character. Plus, I have no idea how to delete it nor edit it.)
Edit: Eh, f**k it. Say what you want about me and/or my characters in this thread. The PM thing was stupid anyways.

[Wuvvums]

Shadovarn has always been fun despite him being a creepy character O: maybe that's the novelty of it though, sort of knowing that he's evil and stuff but talking to him anyways.

I just wish that most of his rp wasn't bogged down with the "hunt down the bad guy" sort of stuff, but that's not necessarily something you can control. The high-speed bike chases and the arena combat were always fun.

I do hope he comes back at some point c:

I'm not very objective when it comes to critique, but I can say that your characters have always entertained me and made the rp either fun or funny :B

[Binkleheimer]

Thank you, Wuvvums.
However, it'd be nice if you read that I don't want Shado in this thread. >.< And that anything about him should be PM'd to me.
It's only there because I don't want anything to be...well... stupid about it in this thread.
Plus, I know no one PM's people about stuff like him.

[Wuvvums]

Oh whoops B:

Shall I delete?

[Binkleheimer]

Bumpeth for lulz
and Feedbacks
and stuff.
Mostly lulz though.

[Miah]

Shadovarn is creepy as hell, and an arrogant, up himself jerk. This in itself makes for an awesome character, even if every character pretty much hates him.

I like your others too. Wilhelm feels the most naturally played though

[Binkleheimer]

Bumpeth for lulz
And adding in DAN, human peasant!

[Cressy]

Hmm.

When I have experienced your characters, they all were well rounded and fun, and even though we haven't RPed in some time, I would say that when we did...it was a good time.

My one issue, and I have mentioned it before, is that you tend to multibox a lot. I remember sitting once for a good five or six minutes waiting for a response, only to figure out you had alt logged on to another character. It isn't just you who does this, but remember, if you would rather be RPing on your other character, just do that and don't make the other people wait with their finger's up their asses. :/ It really is a put off and makes the enjoyable moments of our RP sessions seem...well, not worth it.

[Reigen]

Wilhelm Grimsong

Can you say character change much? Holy fel batman, it was like talking to a different person when I saw him again. He was not the same guy. I have to say that's good from the standpoint his character did developed, which is what you were going for from the last feedback thread.

He's a jerk now! =(

He's played well, I feel, and I don't think he's broken character for anyone. He seems like your normal man who's out for his own good and to crap with anyone else who tries to make him do any different.

*thumbs up*

Del Delamore

Del…to be honest seems like a Sin'dorei version of Wilhelm. The characters are frightenly similar. Besides for viewpoints, it's as if interacting with the same character.

You might want to try to separate the two a little.

Also, spellbrokens suck! /nerdrage

Charlie

I've seen him. He's adorable. Do want.

Narm Felfury

He's the perverted old grandfather that every person needs. I really did enjoy the little time of RP I had with him. He's for sure someone I enjoy to RP with, most of all how he and Reigen dueled up on the light lover in Booty Bay.

I haven't really RPed with him much outside of those few, but he's a nice break from all the “SRS BUIZNES” RP out there.

Gold star!

Necronium

He's Mutt. He stays in character, and he's a pervert. I'm seeing a trend here.

He fills his roll of imposing protector rather well and doesn't really offer much outside of that. He reacts as he should, and I love it when he forces people to get out of Reigen's chair in the crypt.

Aside from that, there's not really much I can think to say.

Shadovarn

Oh Shadovarn, how I despise thee ICly, but love your concept OOCly.

To put it simple, he's an evil jerk whom most everyone wants dead, and has died a few times as a result from his actions. I love how you take the drawbacks serious with his deaths, and that his character develops from the actions he faces.

I also strongly approve how you won't change his character despite the OOC rage you have faces as a result from certain things.

He is a strong character.

Try not to pull another Astus with him.

[Binkleheimer]

Bumpeth fer teh lawlz.

[Loxmardin]

... 'eeeeeeeello.

Ahem. Well. I'm as bad as anyone at wording these things, so here goes.

One thing I admire about you as an RPer here is that you have very... how to put it... Steadfast characters? While many of your characters have rather odd and sometimes frowned upon principles and personalities, you don't budge as an RPer, sticking to your character concept no matter the weather, if that makes sense. It's one of the things that really make you stand out and I love that about you and your characters. They are well defined, interesting and fluent. And you've got the guts to play them as they are supposed to be played.

What else... Well. I don't really have any comments on your individual characters. That's much harder for me. I only really got to know Wilhelm and Del (Shadovarn, too, very briefly) over the time we've been RPing together, and Wilhelm is the only character whose development I've been able to follow all the way. Since, well. I've been there through his whole journey, more or less. Indirectly, most of the time, but you catch my drift. His development has been a wee bit limited, but at least he has some restraints nowadays! That word didn't even exist in his life before and it's refreshing to see that he's growing as a person and adapting to his coming role. We need to get more action with him and Gisae, though.

Del is very similar to what Wilhelm used to be. Or still is. Just, well. Restrained. Yeah. Del is just more smooth in his way of doing things. A smooth talker and a charmer in a whole other way than Wilhelm. I very much enjoy Del despite that, though, as they have their key differences. I noticed that Del is much, much more... Harsh, so to speak. When he brings down the hammer, he smashes it hard. Merciless! That's the word I was looking for! Again, I'll stress how much I admire you for sticking to that.

And I know that you didn't specifically ask for OOC feedback, but. I love you, man! <3