Damned Ghouls! (RC)

[Soree]

Lawliette stared at the monster in the mouth, as it charged her. She went to block it, but it was useless. It knocked her down, she started to think of her past. Of her lover, of her family. Lawliette retaliated with a blow of hope, punching the ghoul in the face, but it only angered him more. He went for the neck, and bit. Hard. She fell, her neck torn, bleeding out. The drunken man besides her saw her die, screaming at the ghoul, and chased it away. And so she remained. Her neck ravaged. Her body bruised and cut. Her body was later taken away by Keak's gang, and paid the Goblins to ressurect her.

Killer: Aurel ((Ghoul ))

Ressurector: Goblins.

Temporal Drawback:
A whole Hell of pain
Limps
Temporary reduction of vision.

Permanent Damage:
Loss of partial knowledge, such as certain people, her hometown. Nothing vital, such as her name.
Permanent neck Stiffness.
Reduced agility.

[FlyingSquirrel]

You may want to add more Temporary Drawbacks, and space out the current ones as such.

Temporary Drawbacks: 1
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[Soree]

Done.

[FlyingSquirrel]

For both, I meant.

[Jurkey]

"Keak's gang"...
Lawliette's awesome brother paid for the ressurection.

[BountyHunter]

Oh, as the Ghoul who done this. I approve.