Aphetoros Needs to be Better

[Aphetoros]

As the title says, I know I can be better. I've just recently returned to the server, and I know this Summer has changed me quite some bit.

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I would like feedback on all of my characters known to ya'll: Crescenthorn, Astus, Tom, Luciene, Daitoku, Su'yana, and Gul'dhar. But most of all I'd like feedback on my thread in the IC forums, Dreams for Motivation.

[Aphetoros]

Bump, edited first post.