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Feedback for a Corpse (Sudeth)

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Feedback for a Corpse (Sudeth)
Forenzic Offline
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09-13-2012, 08:37 PM (This post was last modified: 10-27-2012, 03:10 PM by Forenzic.)
Hey Ya'll! Would like some feedback on my main char, Sudeth Ironjaw.
"When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. They told me I didnt understand the assignment, and I told them they didnt understand life." - John Lennon


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10-19-2012, 04:38 AM
I love your RP, Forenzic! But something about Sudeth... His ego is huge, and it fustrates me sometimes. But I would usually put those emotions into my character! That`s what makes your RP enjoyable, how realistic you play your character most of the times!


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10-19-2012, 06:26 AM
I Like sudeth, he's always good to see from a Red Rose perspective. He follows orders and still leads, seems to have a very grounded personality. I enjoy him fighting in arenas and use of enchantments. One thing that didn't sit well with his portrayal was his fight with the elemental. After getting repeatedly attacked to stand up and say \o/ come at me bro, again was a bit much. He's lucky he wasn't swiftly killed and discarded from the situation. Sometimes we have to take an ass whopping and lay there. Same with roll fights if the score is 1-0 or 2-0 and there were crits dealt, or a lot of fighting. Out of respect for the winner/loser, or the fight/RP in general it is well received to take a more serious note of your wounds and how your character would be effected. Just my opinion.
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10-19-2012, 06:58 AM (This post was last modified: 10-19-2012, 07:01 AM by Forenzic.)
Made the post a month ago; just now giving me feedback :P.

But yeah, I have a lot of trouble realizing when Sudeth should feel pain mostly due to him being a forsaken. I'm fine with my other characters during fights since I can actually tell when they're down and out persay, due to the amount of beating they've gotten. With Sudeth and forsaken in general I really have trouble on how much pain they can feel or if they can even feel pain at all. From what I've read holy magic is one of the only things that can really -hurt- them, although I'm probably wrong.

Oh also on the elemental thing, Sudeth had a grudge against him due to knocking him back against a wall just a few days prior, along with his associate Finwaz. He was seeing how far the elemental would go, and now that he got his arms ripped off he'll most likely subside Lol.

But anyway, thanks for the feedback!
"When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. They told me I didnt understand the assignment, and I told them they didnt understand life." - John Lennon


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10-19-2012, 11:14 AM
First: Nub

Second: I loves ya! I like how you RP, and even though Sudeth really could go and betray the RR he hasn't and even follows orders well (A rarity in any guild I've seen) he really seems like a soldier.

Third: I had no idea this was here >.<
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10-26-2012, 07:42 PM
Well, now that Kidnapped's almost over, would love some feedback on Sudeth. Really want to see what he's like from different view points.
"When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. They told me I didnt understand the assignment, and I told them they didnt understand life." - John Lennon


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10-27-2012, 03:11 PM
Bump! I changed the title since my forum name is nothing like my char names xD.
"When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. They told me I didnt understand the assignment, and I told them they didnt understand life." - John Lennon


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10-27-2012, 03:23 PM
Be more armless! I can't wait for the RP when Ormica meets Sudeth after Kidnapped >.<
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10-27-2012, 03:43 PM
I love Sudeth! He's an awesome character that portrays a forsaken rather well. Though there are some things you're still finding out about Forsaken, (A.K.A Darkvision, fool!) learning is part of the roleplay experience. =) I think more forsaken should be as light-hearted and fun to be around as him. Bring on the board games!
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