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Gastral's Intro (trying)
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First and foremost: Tell us about yourself, as a player:
Hi:), I''m kevin and im rping for a month now.
I really enjoy it. I have rp'd a Pers guard for fun, and i was suprised about how well i did. And than i wanted to take it deeper. Im not really a good Lore guy, i admit. But thats only because i dont have 24/7 time for reading and stuff.

What country do you come from? What is your primary language?:
I'm a dutchy xD. and i speak pirmary(well u can guess): Dutch.
English is my secundairy. had nd 8.9 for it at school. (while my own language was 7)

How did you get into Warcraft?:
A friend of mine played it and i was like :O. I have played other mmo's like Pristontale, Ultima... Than suddenly my brother started to play wow to and gave me the oppertunity to go on his acc for my own char. (imma bit a real dutchy, i didnt want to pay for playing wow every month).

What made you seek our server over others?:
I was on a rp server before, but well.. The gm's there didn't play fair. It was always the GM's way, like they wanned it.. So i was looking for another.
Every where i looked i saw CotH so i thought, that must be a good one, let try!

What kinds of roleplay do you enjoy?:
I love to rp a male that is, well manered (did i say that right?)
Helpfull, kind and mean if he has to.
I also like to rp a Captain, or something, that takes orders to do a mission and comes back for his reward. (Captain can me assasin/merc aswell)

What is your favorite race/class? Why?:
Blood elves. I really like the background story of them and i love to play paladin, and on horde thats the only race for pally.

What are your expectations of this server?:
I hope ppl are open for new players, so that like: they meet me and get ask me to come along. On the other server it was kinda hard to get along in rp's unless they knew you... So if u played there for a week the asked you to rp...

Out of all of our rules and regulations listed on our server, which appeals to you the most?:
No godmoding, metagaming or powergaming.
Is it really tru? Is it even possible on a private rp server?:O w00t!!!!

Lastly, tell us a story! It can be short, it can be long; but most importantly, we want to see your work in action. Go!:
Well... A story... I'm not so good in story's but i had made a background for my char.. Hope it will do...


Bal'a dash, (greetings)

My name is Gastral, only child of Gatrash (father) and Sar'an (mother).
They gave me birth on a farm in the village Sunstrider Isle. Where I worked along side with my father.
I am 20 years of age and have learned the way of the Paladin as you will read in this story I am telling you.

The history:
A long time ago, my grandparents fought in the third war during the siege of the Quel'Thalas by the Scourge. (as the Lore says)
After they seeked with others to reunite with Prince Kael'thas Sunstrider, and they have since reclaimed Silvermoon city. Lor'themar Theron led them in Kael'thas' absence. Now, having discovered Kael'thas' true objective (to summon Kil'jaeden to the world), the blood elves of Silvermoon have abandoned him. Lor'themar Theron, Halduron Brightwing and Grand Magister Rommath have been presiding over Silvermoon in the absence of any officially appointed leader.

(Non lore, but my story of my family)
After my grand parents had abandoned Kael'Thas, with hundreds of others after the great discovery, Kael'Thas seeked for the one's who he thought "betrayed" him.
He send out bounty hunters to exterminate the whole family's of those who "betrayed" him.
It took years to find my grandparents and though years flew by my grandparents died naturally. Still the bounty hunters hunted the family not knowing my parents gave birth to me.

The story:
When I was 13 years of age, I went to Silvermoon to sell the harvest we had made for food an supplies.
In the mean while bounty hunters got track of my family and came to the village to slaughter them.
When I got back I found my parents coverd by they're on blood.
I felt weak, but suddenly I knew what I had to do. I mean, the rest of the village knew I was the son of Gatrash and Sar'an.
I left the village, filled with anger. I had to leave. So I went to Silvermoon to sell the farm, so I could profide me food along the way. But than I had a better idea, signing up for the army to get some descent training.
I learned the way of the Paladin, cause I was overwhelmed by the powers of those who trained it for years.

7 years later, I was ready to continue my way, away from the village, because I knew the hunters would soon find out that the ones they slaughtered had gave birth.
I traveled and met merchants and travellers on the way who asked me to provide them safety from the danger that was up ahead in the lands we crossed.
In exchange they gave me a quick travel trough the lands on horse carts and some food.
They all heard about the action in the village, well I can not blame them cause 7 years had passed.
However, an old man called Jo'gran Shalur, knew more about the story's they told about the incident than I could presume. I never liked to talk with him along the way, but he told me to travel south. So I could get safety.

When I left him at a village, named Raventsuk village, I thought by myself: If he knows... The hunters will to... And so they did.
They were on my trail and i had to make sure I keep travelling south, as I don't know why, but the old man seems to be sure about that. I never trusted someone, except him... There was something I recognized what my father always said: Selama ashal'anore. (Justice for our people.) Maybe the old man thought I could bring that.

As I travelled and met others I heard some people talk in an Inn at Hammerfall where I was getting some sleep. They were talking about a merchant that got killed near Raventusk by keeping information behind about a person... I knew it was about them so I ran off... As hard as I could...
Scared by that what they told each other.
I realised the news travels faster than I could run away from the hunters. "If the news travels this fast, they will find me in no-time."
And so they did... One and a half day later...
I was about to enter Northgate pass when they ambushed me. I did not know what had happened on that moment... It turned black, and the next thing I remember was that I was covered in blood running trough the pass... I needed clean clothes, so I washed them in the first water pool I could find. (Helm's bed lake)

I had a major headache after that so I travelled to the nearest inn where I read the next thing in a newspaper: "Two bounty hunters got killed by unknow powers."

I didn't knew of it would get me more in trouble, but I was releaved. Knowing that I could handle the situation... But, I had to get my powers in control. A guy (A human mage called Jason Goodman) at the Inn noticed bloodspatters on my trousers, and starts to ask questions... What happened? And when I didnt answer, but looked at the newspaper (what was a stupid thing to do) he knew I was the one who did it. And offered me to get control of my powers as he heard my side of the story. (I only told the situation when I saw the hunters, the rest I refused to tell) So we made an agreement, I payed him gold that I had been giving by the ones I helped, and he would help me control my powers. I had to... For the future, so I could feel the power i had...

2 weeks later I was ready to continue south, but I was tired of running. And went back to my birthplace. To help on the lands and as a protector of the village.

I have become a respected young man, who respects other people. And has now be left alone by hunters... For now atleast...
I began to miss the travelling, so one day I will travel the same road, south. So I can again, help people on the way.

Is there anything else you would like to add, ask, or otherwise clarify?:
Hope you have enough info, and hope u would give me a chance;)
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#2
I'm not sure if I'm in anyway authorized to tell you this, but, I think you should leave out some of the shortenings and smileys, and write "I" with a capital letter.
Azheron's back in business. For reals.
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Azheron Wrote:I'm not sure if I'm in anyway authorized to tell you this, but, I think you should leave out some of the shortenings and smileys, and write "I" with a capital letter.

Couldnt find so much shortenings... And yea i know its supposed to be with capital I, im changing it now. Thnx for tip.
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platvoet Wrote:
Azheron Wrote:I'm not sure if I'm in anyway authorized to tell you this, but, I think you should leave out some of the shortenings and smileys, and write "I" with a capital letter.

Couldnt find so much shortenings... And yea i know its supposed to be with capital I, im changing it now. Thnx for tip.

He's talking about things like "Ppl" "Thx" "NP" "omg" and stuff. Abbreviations, for lack of a better term.




Move him into the sun—
Gently its touch awoke him once,
At home, whispering of fields half-sown.
Always it woke him, even in France,
Until this morning and this snow.
If anything might rouse him now
The kind old sun will know.

Think how it wakes the seeds,—
Woke, once, the clays of a cold star.
Are limbs, so dear-achieved, are sides,
Full-nerved—still warm—too hard to stir?
Was it for this the clay grew tall?
—O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
To break earth’s sleep at all?
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#5
That only happens with me when i'm OOC.
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#6
Ok.. This is weird..
We need to be patient but you guys welcome ppl to your server in like half an hour?...
I'm waiting for a response to come on, cause i really really want to:).
If im not qualified, for your server, than let me know so i can look further.

THANKS ALLOT for replying so fast...
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#7
Sorry about that! Yeah, go on now, your intro is fine apart from a few things!

Welcome to Conquest of the Horde!


Just do your best with your spelling and grammar and you'll do fine :3. If you need anything be sure to ask me!




Move him into the sun—
Gently its touch awoke him once,
At home, whispering of fields half-sown.
Always it woke him, even in France,
Until this morning and this snow.
If anything might rouse him now
The kind old sun will know.

Think how it wakes the seeds,—
Woke, once, the clays of a cold star.
Are limbs, so dear-achieved, are sides,
Full-nerved—still warm—too hard to stir?
Was it for this the clay grew tall?
—O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
To break earth’s sleep at all?
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