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Benjaboss' Intro
#1
First and foremost: Tell us about yourself, as a player:
Greetings. I've been playing World of Warcraft for almost 3 years now. I got into RP on another private server about 6 months ago. In the beginning i didn't know how to RP but i quickly learned how to RP and i recieved High RP Status as some might say, on that server.

What country do you come from? What is your primary language?:
I Was Born in Denmark, and my primary language is Danish. I started to talk English when i was 5

How did you get into Warcraft?:
Some friends from school started, so i thought i would try it to


What made you seek our server over others?:
I've heard it from some friends that RP to, they said this server was a good RP server even if you don't like all kinds of RP like me

What kinds of roleplay do you enjoy?:
Hmm... Tavern RP, Villiage RP, Travel RP, Kingdom RP, and last but not least War RP

What is your favorite race/class? Why?: My Favorite class is a Gnome cause i like their story and the way they can be. Small but Though.


What are your expectations of this server?:
Good Roleplayers and to have fun

Out of all of our rules and regulations listed on our server, which appeals to you the most?:
Respect. Always treat a man like you would like to be treated.

Lastly, tell us a story! It can be short, it can be long; but most importantly, we want to see your work in action. Go!:

Dueraoni was born some time before the First War ever started. During this time he followed the life of any average dwarf growing up in Ironforge. He looked up to the Bronzebeard brothers as inspirations of what he would become in life. He was very close with his siblings Tiratan and Diambodur, but less so with Leiana and Kondur, though they all bonded.

Once Dueranoi was an adult, he practiced swordsmanship and studied masonry, unlike many of his peers who chose to indulge themselves in engineering and mining. When news of the First War came to his families ears, everyone wondered what would happen if the orcs charged northward, into Khaz Modan.

Before the Second War started, Duer's father, Falgrun suffered a heart attack and never recovered. Leiana and Kondur, Duer's older sister and brother refused to take up the family brewery. Duer was next in line.

Duer accepted and studied on how to make the best brews and turned the Thogrim Brewery into an enormous success. During this time, Leiana was fed up with Ironforge and the life she had here. She left the family one night and left into the wilds of Dun Morogh.

By this time, bad news was coming from the Dwarven front, in less than a day, the orcs had broken the Dwarvish lines and were sweeping through Loch Modan and soon, Ironforge feared, into Dun Morogh until they captured Ironforge itself.

Thankfully, Ironforge was defended by the last bastion of Dwarvish hope. It was during these years a paladin traveled to Ironforge. Duer's excellent brewery was starting to go bankrupt because of multiple
'drills' or 'threats' arrived too close to the mountain fortress. Duer closed up shop to stop the loss of gold.

Duer met this paladin and he taught Duer all he wanted to know about becoming a paladin. Duer was able to become close to a full-fledged paladin before his master was sent away into battle past the Dark Portal, where he was killed.

Diambodur, Duer's youngest brother had decided he would try the brewery business, and with Duer's permission reopened the Thogdrim Brewery.

Some days before the Alliance Expedition was lost in Draenor, "Thor's Axe" Tiratan, Duer's other younger brother had just arrived in Ironforge from that same front. When news of the loss of the expedition was heard, Tiratan thought he had disgraced himself.

Tiratan had fought on that front before being sent back to Nethergarde, then Ironforge just days before his comrades were trapped on the other side. Tiratan left Ironforge and enlisted back into the Dwarven Military.

Duer struggled to keep knowledge of his paladin training in his head, without any refreshment on how to do certain things, Duer forgot them. It came to a point where Duer abandoned that path and decided he'd become a plain warrior and enlisted in the military. The Third War started some time after Duer had started, but Duer was sent to do battle with the Scourge.

Amazingly, he found that Tiratan was his commanding officer at the field. He, along with a Dwarvish Regiment, fought Scourge pockets while Arthas and his expedition were in Northrend. Shortly after Arthas returned to Lordaeron with Frostmourne, Duer and the Dwarvish Regiment in the Plaguelands had been ambushed. The Dwarves were massacred, but Duer, Tiratan and a couple others had survived because they had been scouting or had somehow evaded Scourge.

The group went into full retreat, trying to make it to the Hinterlands. The Scourge caught up to them, and Tiratan sacrificed himself to buy the others more time. Two dwarves drowned in the river they were swimming to escape, but along with Duer, the rest of the survivors survived.

Duer was soon dishonorably discharged from the military. His fighting in battle was not what a standard warrior would go for, he would go for kidney shots, cheapshots, eye gouges, dagger hurling, etc. Duer, angry for the loss of Tiratan and his discharge settled back in Ironforge where soon after, his mother Dagmi died. She had tripped and fallen into the Great Forge.

Duer settled in Ironforge, helping Diambodur at the family brewery for a year during Archimonde's assent, where he developed a deep hatred of Diambodur's carrion bird, Barkbeak.Soon Duer left that and went out to fight Ogres in a militia type raid against them in the Badlands. The dwarves there were unhappy of Duer's fighting techniques, but he saved each of them at least once, because he was the only real soldier there, so no one complained.

After this, Duer traveled around where help was needed, getting the job done. Now, Duer has decided he will try and start himself anew in the Dwarven military, maybe try to have a part in resolving conflicts of the world, posing as a dwarf the name of Bloodbeard.

Duer has "died" in a tragic fall into a giant gear in Tinker Town, whereas a dwarf named Bloodbeard looks pretty similar. Hm.


Is there anything else you would like to add, ask, or otherwise clarify?:
I also used this story on Retail.
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#2
If you know that your story is not that good, why don't you try to improve it? :)
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#3
Cause i can't find any better in my mind. i have a story but its in Danish
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#4
Please keep in mind this is your first impression for the entire server. You're going to have to improve the story or re-do it if even you yourself think it is bad.




Move him into the sun—
Gently its touch awoke him once,
At home, whispering of fields half-sown.
Always it woke him, even in France,
Until this morning and this snow.
If anything might rouse him now
The kind old sun will know.

Think how it wakes the seeds,—
Woke, once, the clays of a cold star.
Are limbs, so dear-achieved, are sides,
Full-nerved—still warm—too hard to stir?
Was it for this the clay grew tall?
—O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
To break earth’s sleep at all?
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#5
I'm gonna Translate the one from school. To see if thats good i know its about WoW
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#6
Now that is a lovely story xD
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