Piken Feedback

[Harmonic]

Hey, dood.


I've played with you for about four years, as you stated in my feedback thread, and that's a long time to get to talkin' to someone, let alone just RPing.

I have always enjoyed RPing with you, considering you and I sort of learned how to better RP right here on CoTH, going from our derpy two troll RP, where they were borderline completely mentally defunct, to now actually making characters that have quit a bit of structure and depth. I always know that when I do something where you are involved, I will be entertained.

Honestly, the only negative I can find, is that sometimes during RP, you get pretty quiet. I know, not every post can be amazing or comedic gold, but it still gets me a bit antsy, like, "Man, when is he gonna say something I can have Hoof rag on him about?"

It's not often enough to worry about, really though. It's just that in these here things you have to give a bit of constructive criticism along with the praise, so, that's honestly all I could find, heh.

Piken BEEBEE, I love you, bromance style.

[Piken]

You posted! /swoon

And yeah, I definitely tend to get quiet at times. Of course, the other night I wasn't in a great mood so that doesn't exactly add to my RP-age. :P But I always need to be doing something so I tend to distract myself then realize "FUU RPING STILL" but I will try to work on that, brah!

/bromance love

[flammos200]

Piken, Piken, Piken...

First time I'd heard of you, you were still a GM, and one of the big-wigs of the GSF, with your namesake. After you went off the grid, I next remembered you during an event a couple of years ago when Rigley had a certain item in his inventory. A 'Steam Spin Pistol', "Made famous by a certain Gnome". 'Twas during a battle in Winterspring.

And then you came back. Repeatedly. I recall first RP-ing with you on Cela, oh so long ago, when Ceredor wielded his twin-scythe weapon, and was a dreamy-eyed youth wishing for Demon Hunter-hood. I liked him. Found him both fun to interact with and funny. An interesting and engaging character. Perhaps not the most verbose of Kaldorei, but the few words he exchanged around that time said a great many things.

I remember spending time in WSG and seeing you toil over the three or four instances of the enchanted glaive. You must've put quite the handful of Silver Tokens into that back then, and you were picking out your tattoo.

The image stayed with me. You made such a lasting impression on me back then, in your dedication to Ceredor both IC and OOC, that it was an honor to see you bring him back and ask for training. I'm quite happy I agreed.

I loved watching Ceredor grow, and I enjoy that you've taken things slowly, following a natural course, rather than forcing him into tight corners where bits of his original personality may have been chipped off. Take care to ease him through the changes he's experiencing, and don't leap all too suddenly from one place to another.

Then again, you know the virtue of patience already - you were the one who wanted to take things slowly in the first place, and go down a detailed route, something that I appreciate a great deal. You've portrayed his journey quite well thus far - without undesirable traits like mastering stuff instantly - instead still keeping up the pace, and I am confident that you will continue to do so.

I like the interactions between Ceredor and Theleniel. They're quite fun - and surprisingly funny. I approve greatly. A pretty interesting factor, though, is their racial difference, and Ceredor's coping with it. It's like he's slowly developed a sort of 'older sister' image of Thelly.

Something I'm very, very glad for is that Ceredor isn't a speshul snowflake, as Demon Hunters can sometimes get, instead being pretty straightforward and earnest, and a damn fine example of his race, whilst still maintaining individuality and... hmm... I think the right word here is "attitude". Personality stands out in his case, rather than what or who he is.

If there's anything you should work on, I'd like to see a little better spacing in your paragraphs. It's not an issue in-game, of course, but in posts, when one's more than six-seven lines long and contains dialogue, consider having the dialogue bit start another paragraph. It's just nitpicking, I know, but it'd make stuff a leetle easier to go through.

Otherwise, I'm quite satisfied with how both you and Ceredor have performed thus far, and I look forward to seeing how you two cope with the challenges ahead. /grin

....EDIT: Silly, I never knew -you- were the one who played Aiden. The human that kept being bossed around like a kid by the exceedingly ancient NElves. Oh gods, I lol-ed so much at that.

I wish he was still around. Taera still has the sketch he made of her, in her GHI, in the Gilded Rose. And I suspect Cela'd remember him still. Wish I saw more sides of him than the stuttering, drawing man-child, because he hinted to tonsa' hidden depths. But there's always more time!

[Piken]

Well shi---.. I wasn't expecting that at all. I'll admit, my face went a bit red a couple times as I read all that. I'm extremely happy and honored to be held in such high esteem, especially from someone I view as a much better RPer and writer than I. :blush:

I'm very happy to hear that you're enjoying our RP with Thelly(I like calling her that, I shall do so from now on ) and Ceredor. I've always tried to figure out how their relationship was and thinking back on their exchanges, even if sometimes they were very simple and short, he could and does see her as an 'older sister' figure, in a way, which is a -very- interesting way of looking at it! It makes all the RP feel a lot better now, thinking on it all.

And again, I'm honored by the things you've said. It makes me all giddy seeing that I made impressions on someone. ;-;

As for Aiden, yes, I played that little Human with the very maternal Larshy watching over him and the very teasing and sometimes even playfully cruel Ceredor tormenting him for his own enjoyment, only to get scolded by Larshka. I would love to play Aiden again some, and if/when I do, I'll be sure to tell you. So many ideas to build on, so little time to handle them all. ;-;

And for the paragraphs, I would appreciate any tips. My knowledge with such things is actually VERY limited, like my extensive use of commas. >.> I try not to make so many run-ons, but I think I murder my passages with them. I will work on it, though!

Thank you so much for the feedback! ^.^

And this response was clearly not done in the order of things. Fuggit, deal with it. :B

[Piken]

Bumping again, (replacing the last post..) with a feedback request on my RP, as well as this thread!! It's my Demon Hunter thread that's been going on for.. 6 months now? >.> I'd love some input on it, too! ..Please? D:

[Piken]

Bumpin' dis again! Would love feedback on.. anything, really. Been RPing Aiden more lately, so would love some feedback on him, but also Atius, or my DH thread, or me as a person or whatever. Just someone post here other than me! ;-;

[Mikain]

Here's something! Just kidding, I've got nothing...

We haven't rp'd since the original GSF. And the original Grey Militia before that. Damn that was forever ago...

Some of the best rp times though! I can only assume you've gotten even better in the years since.



( I miss those old days. ;_; )

[Krent]

( I miss those old days. ;_; )

THEN WHY DON'T YOU STOP TROLLING THE FORUMS AND COME BACK TO RP.

JERK.

[Piken]

Here's something! Just kidding, I've got nothing...

We haven't rp'd since the original GSF. And the original Grey Militia before that. Damn that was forever ago...

Some of the best rp times though! I can only assume you've gotten even better in the years since.



( I miss those old days. ;_; )

Ah yes, the good ol' days, with us going all Delta Squad on Lepers and eating excessive amounts of candy while arguing about nonsense. Goooood times.

( I miss those old days. ;_; )

THEN WHY DON'T YOU STOP TROLLING THE FORUMS AND COME BACK TO RP.

JERK.

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[Harmonic]

Psst.

He's leaving for the chair force like tomorrow or something.

[Piken]

I don't care. That's no excuse. >:

[Harmonic]

...Right?

Oh and to stay on topic... you are the nubz.

[Piken]

Bumping in hopes of getting some feedback on the Second Sight thread!

And again, thank you if you've stuck with it the entire time. xD

[Piken]

Bumping this again, in even more hopes of people actually responding and giving me some feedback, since I've been RPing Aiden and Ceredor a lot more. ;-; Prz giff mi feadbax..

Edit: Not just praise, stuff I need to improve on, etc. Please and thank you~

[Edgar]

Second Sight was awesome. You're awesome.

Haven't RPed with Ceredor yet. Need to.