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Uyendu [Broken Shaman]
#1
Character Race: Krokul (Broken)
Character Name: Uyendu
Character Class: Shaman
Display ID: 21105 at scale 0.92
Duration: Persistent
Purpose:
  • Explore and illuminate the fate of the krokul (Draenic Pilgrimage)
  • General roleplay
Location: Mainly Outland and alliance territory
Level: 80

Player: Bovel
Character Full Name: Uyendu
Character In-Game Name: Uyendu
Nickname(s): (Coming.)
Association(s): Sha’naar
Race: Krokul
Class: Shaman
Age: 3045
Sex: Male
Hair: Tendrils
Eyes: Dimmed blue glow
Weight: 178 kg / 392 lbs
Height: 2,01 m / 6' 7"
Usual Garments/Armor: Carries a gnarled staff with glowing carvings. Mostly wear thick leatherwear.

Personality:
Uyendu has a short temper and is easily angered but rarely lashes out physically due to the lethargy of his kind. At most he scolds or shakes a clenched fist at whoever/whatever angers him. Otherwise his demeanor is slow, mostly taking a moment to ponder on what to say or how to act.

He face uncorrupted draenei with bridled bitterness due to their treatment of the krokul at the time of their change and ever since. Uyendu wish to see the survival of their kin, twisted or not but wishes the draenei would open their eyes to more than their Light and naaru.


History:
Uyendu was born draenei upon a world covered in dense, damp jungles. As a child he was unruly and violent, prone to get himself into fights with the other children. By the guidance of an anchorite his parents sent Uyendu away to harbringers where he was to come to understand the effects of violence and gain a measure of discipline. In the end the adolescent had joined the ranks of the warriors.

War came upon the draenei on Draenor as the natives became warped by the powers of the Legion. Young and inexperienced Uyendu was one of those chosen to flee into Zangar, he was to accompany one of the last groups leaving the capital, Shattrath. Instead the young warrior snuck and hid away from his superiors.

He stood shoulder to shoulder with his brothers when the attackers broke into the city and Uyendu’s first real battle commenced. All around his kindred fell under the axe of an orc or weakened by the red mist and flowed across the battlefield. He pressed on and endured longer than many, his combat skills enough to keep him alive but the inevitable happened and Uyendu was buried beneath the crumbling tower of a shrine.

The injured harbringer limped away from his first taste at warfare - alive, his mind thickening from the effects of the red mist. So he just wandered where his hooves pointed until he passed out. He woke up in a makeshift camp somewhere on the border to Zangar. The days that followed were filled with horror for the survivng draenei when their connection to the Light ceased, their shapes withered and their tails shrunk to petty stumps. The initial horror had by now turned into a silent self-loathing.

Decades later Uyendu and Pool’uk, his saviour were both caught by intruding naga, bonded with each other by magical means and sent out into the marshlands as part of their workforce. The corruption had reached into his friend’s mind turning him insane and as a desperate act of survival Uyendu struck his crude shovel at Pool’uk. He felt every blow that he landed upon his kinsman, the pain echoing through his whole being but the will to survive overwhelmed the suffering.

Through waist deep bog he waded and across withdrawing streams he swam aimlessly. The experience of killing his own and all the while feeling their pain, the horror of meeting death at the hands of a friend had been too much for Uyendu. After days of pacing straight ahead exhaustion finally won and he collapsed onto the wet moss. But in the far distance he heard a someone calling, a disembodied voice that beckoned him in its direction, in which he after another day found more survivors.

It was a spirit of Water that had saved his life and under the guidance of Nobundo he was taught the way of the shaman along with many other krokul. Despite his age Uyendu became a shaman and joined fellow broken at Sha’naar where he would wander the wastes in search of water. Corruption has made him weak and shriveled, being a strong and young warrior trapped within the body of an old draenei. Fog still remains within his mind, weighing down his spirit.
(02-24-2012, 10:15 AM)Piroska Wrote: Conspiracy. That's all it is; Kret's afraid that your pure, digital awesomeness would crash the server if it were allowed.
(06-14-2013, 05:42 PM)McKnighter Wrote: Bovel, Lord of Beards

Character About Involvement
Causticity Blackbreath Goblin Alchemist -
Telaah Draenei Anchorite Writings of an Anchorite

[Image: kiXJxhI.gif]
#2
Why are the letters so large ? o.O
#3
Also, should be posted in the Custom Model Character Submission board if you're looking for one.

I'll move it when you wish.
#4
Yes, I'd like it moved. Seem there was a little mix-up...
(02-24-2012, 10:15 AM)Piroska Wrote: Conspiracy. That's all it is; Kret's afraid that your pure, digital awesomeness would crash the server if it were allowed.
(06-14-2013, 05:42 PM)McKnighter Wrote: Bovel, Lord of Beards

Character About Involvement
Causticity Blackbreath Goblin Alchemist -
Telaah Draenei Anchorite Writings of an Anchorite

[Image: kiXJxhI.gif]
#5
Yay broken! He seems kind of moody, but that's good, for a Krokul.

#6
A few issues:

You mention that an "adolescent" him would have been upon Draenor, but that doesn't make sense. At most the Draenei came upon Draenor 1,000 years ago, which at the age of over 2,000, he would have already been a fully-fledged adult. Especially for a Broken, I'd imagine.
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I'm unsure that the Naga would just let a mind-controlled friend be smacked in the face with a shovel, with absolutely no pursuing Naga around; they just seem to be a tightly-knit race.
Having also read the lore, the Naga could not have possibly been around at that time. They were only summoned by Illidan Stormrage during the events of the Frozen Throne, quite a while after the massacre of the Draenei 75 years ago.
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Finally, I find it strange that with NO prior connections to the Elements, to the Farseer, nor to any shamans or practices that the Water would have saved him at all, without any calling or intervention. I don't think the elements work that way for non-Shamans, and even the Farseer had to pray for it.

But those are just my two cents. I really like the idea in and of itself. :)
Spoiler:
[Image: Morrowind_stamp__Mudcrab_by_Shade_Duelist.jpg]
#7
No, I mention he joined the ranks of the harbringers as an adolescent.

They are caught by the naga many years after the fall of Shattrath, will clarify that. They not mind-controlled, only bonded so that one could hurt the other or make the other feel if hurt himself, another way to keep them in line using fear. Slaves are many and meaningless, I don't see there being enough naga around to keep them all in line all the time. Besides, wicked creatures as slavers might be would perhaps like to see someone killing another and feeling all the pain himself?

Some in-game quests in Nagrand describe how the elements reach out to whoever would be willing to help. Water calls out to save him cause he just broke free from slavery where the labour was draining the marshlands. It was not an act out of pure kindness since it set him on the path of the shaman and now is basically Water's butler. Note that he was not spoken to or guided properly, just led vaguely by a sound.
(02-24-2012, 10:15 AM)Piroska Wrote: Conspiracy. That's all it is; Kret's afraid that your pure, digital awesomeness would crash the server if it were allowed.
(06-14-2013, 05:42 PM)McKnighter Wrote: Bovel, Lord of Beards

Character About Involvement
Causticity Blackbreath Goblin Alchemist -
Telaah Draenei Anchorite Writings of an Anchorite

[Image: kiXJxhI.gif]
#8
Letters are still giant. >->
Spoiler:
Why can't you people use the normal typing ? Hmph!
:D
#9
(08-26-2011, 12:07 AM)13kira13 Wrote: Letters are still giant. >->
:D

They are? Not to me. Well I try making them smaller then.

(02-24-2012, 10:15 AM)Piroska Wrote: Conspiracy. That's all it is; Kret's afraid that your pure, digital awesomeness would crash the server if it were allowed.
(06-14-2013, 05:42 PM)McKnighter Wrote: Bovel, Lord of Beards

Character About Involvement
Causticity Blackbreath Goblin Alchemist -
Telaah Draenei Anchorite Writings of an Anchorite

[Image: kiXJxhI.gif]
#10
Approved!
I noticed you didn't include any requested armor/weapons. Please let me know if you need a set of items.
#11
I'll look up the ones I wanted and let you know!


AND YES! This also explain why I cannot log onto the game... blasted Murphy!
(02-24-2012, 10:15 AM)Piroska Wrote: Conspiracy. That's all it is; Kret's afraid that your pure, digital awesomeness would crash the server if it were allowed.
(06-14-2013, 05:42 PM)McKnighter Wrote: Bovel, Lord of Beards

Character About Involvement
Causticity Blackbreath Goblin Alchemist -
Telaah Draenei Anchorite Writings of an Anchorite

[Image: kiXJxhI.gif]
#12
I added weapons and armour myself, is that allowed? And I wonder about gold aswell, CMCs are not for grinding or anything other than RP but I cannot get the goldquest and have no means of getting mounts or flying using FPs since I'm broke.

Lastly, would it be possible to get the model shrunken a bit?
(02-24-2012, 10:15 AM)Piroska Wrote: Conspiracy. That's all it is; Kret's afraid that your pure, digital awesomeness would crash the server if it were allowed.
(06-14-2013, 05:42 PM)McKnighter Wrote: Bovel, Lord of Beards

Character About Involvement
Causticity Blackbreath Goblin Alchemist -
Telaah Draenei Anchorite Writings of an Anchorite

[Image: kiXJxhI.gif]


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