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How am I driving?
#16
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Sometimes I think you approve things too swiftly, without looking too deep in them. Otherwise great job! :3
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#17
TL;Dun-wanna-read: I like.

So, first off. as far as characters go, Uthaniel's become better in every possible aspect. He's actually interesting to be around now, and not completely played for laughs anymore. Let me put it this way: Playing a character for laughs isn't necessarily bad - so long as it is done in moderation. You seem to have gotten that, and turned him into more of a person and less of a jester mask.

I have to say, his personality's suffered an improvement, as has his dialogue. Maybe you've just honed your skills a little as time progressed, or maybe you were trying to impress someone. Either way, it worked.

I would also commend you on your choice for him not to really have that many combat skills. In a world of heroes and villains, it takes guts to make a purely non-combat character. That said, he's not without his flaws.

Now, while I haven't met Munix personally IC, I think I know the character well enough to comment on his concept. Lore-wise, he seems a cross between a Templar and a Second War Paladin, and seeing as both concepts are nearly one and the same, I quite approve of this - Perhaps I am biased, as I've seen far too many 'radical paladins' and Light-wielders with inquisitorial manners, but the gentle, benevolent yet stern, knightly and chivalrous Paladin is in -desperate- need for proper portrayal, and I'm very glad you chose to do so.

Additionally, Munix comes from Nesh Solarbreeze - another character that was fairly enjoyable to be around, mainly because you tried bringing something new to the board - and I'm curious as to exactly how close as concepts the 'Prototype' and Munix are, mainly because characters shouldn't feel like a derivation, even if they are similar. So, while a character may be born of the same 'Splinter of the soul', they should be able to express themselves individually. Keep that in mind, and try and pull it off, and you'll go far.

OOC-ly, you're a pretty swell guy. I like the way you handle the drama that comes your way, your work ethic and attitude. What I'm really impressed with though, is the swiftness with which you work. The only words of caution I can impart on this aspect is that you -must- keep your eyes open and your attention sharp if you run through things at a swift pace, so small details that may hamper your progress don't escape you.

In short, be careful before giving verdicts OOC-ly, but keep up the good work in haste. Trust me when I say, people appreciate having swift and to-the-point responses to their queries and profiles and hell, even everyday conversation.

So, yeah. You're going down a nice road, just be careful as to where you place your feet.

Alas, you're still not cool enough.
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#18
Well, Flammos, RP with Munix and you'll find out! (He's quite different from Nesh, though. The mannerisms are there sometimes, you'd see.)

'll be honest. Usually by the seventh profile in a row I try to focus on major flaws and usually skip portions of the history that may be odd.

That's also when I start handing out initials instead of approvals, however, thought a few may have slipped by.

Ultimately,I try to keep a focus on making the process as smooth as I can make it, with varying amounts of success. As it stands, I'm trying to find my pace. It might be a bumpy road 'till then, but all in all, please bear with me- I'm human, and make mistakes.

That's not to say advice isn't heeded, of course. I aim to improve at every mistake, every experience.

As for those who commented on my behavior OOCly...Well,thanks! I'm fairly sure not everyone here absolutely adores me and I neither expect or -want- them to (Challenge is what makes us grow,ain' it?) but that some people think good things about me freshens my spirits a little.

EDIT: As an addendum, some people may have realized I skip over a few profiles at a time. Mind you, I read them all, but I may not post. This usually happens for one of these reasons:
- I feel biased towards unapproving the character
- I have or was unable to find something regarding the profile that I have no reason no condone or condemn.
- I have honestly no opinion on the profile whatsoever.
- I've already posted there too many times. (... I feel bad. )
- A forum helper that wasn't me requested a change that has not yet been made - I don't comment on these profiles since I don't feel it's my place, the FH that asked the question's.

In any of these cases,I take a step back to avoid letting my judgement to be hampered. I don't priorize personal friends or acquaintances in any way, specially since I don't consider the bonds I have with the members of CotH I actually call "friend" as shallow as to be affected by a shot-down profile. This said, as I said before, I'm still human. Whenever I feel I'm being anything but impartial, I step back.
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#19
Haven't actually RP'd with you, but I've RP'd beside you and you seem pretty cool. Not to mention you are hilarious OOC.
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#20
Thank you!
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#21
I would certainly like to role-play with you!
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#22
Hey, hit me up anytime! I'll be more than glad to.
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#23
Can I has moar feedbackz?
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#24
Haven't RPed with you just yet... I saw you helping my friend today though, and I enjoyed what I saw. We'll do something... Soon... /plot
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#25
I see nothing more fitting than have my 1000th post as a request that will help me improve. Feedback, please?
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