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#31
Ah good, so it'd be a chemical, got you. I assumed severed limb (but that is due to hearing rez in the same sentance), or something horribly damaging. Though, since it's through poison (probably one that doesn't exsist in the real world) that's more than believable as a side effect. Just watch out for keeping that arm still too long in cold weather, it won't paralize but it'll not function as full capacity more than likely.
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#32
I really enjoy the RP between Anna and Fala. She's a well played character, and great in the sense that she's got plenty of combat experience, but is also totally innocent. I wish I had some constructive criticism to give but Anna's a well-rounded char, and I enjoy RPing with her. Sorry for the simple answer :P
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#33
I can't recall a time I did not enjoy rping with Annabelle. She is a good character in my opinion.

To offer an idea though, I personally would like it if you, corzilla, tried out a few new character ideas as well. Maybe you have and I just am not aware of it but I've never personally seen you with any amount of dedication to another character other than Annabelle. In my experiences playing different characters and roles makes better rpers out of us all. Not only that but sometimes you more easily are willing to say 'I want to do this but its not suited for character A' when you have character B, C, and D who you can try the same idea for.

Doesn't work for all of us of course so if you feel sticking to Annabelle is best for you go for it.
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#34
I think you need to RP Marwaz more often, like you used to...
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#35
Duraza Wrote:I can't recall a time I did not enjoy rping with Annabelle. She is a good character in my opinion.

To offer an idea though, I personally would like it if you, corzilla, tried out a few new character ideas as well. Maybe you have and I just am not aware of it but I've never personally seen you with any amount of dedication to another character other than Annabelle. In my experiences playing different characters and roles makes better rpers out of us all. Not only that but sometimes you more easily are willing to say 'I want to do this but its not suited for character A' when you have character B, C, and D who you can try the same idea for.

Doesn't work for all of us of course so if you feel sticking to Annabelle is best for you go for it.

I've actually been going back and forth on a nelf idea (no, you can't have her for your Circus ;p), or a draenei hunter idea. Beltharean gave me the idea of a draconic priest.
So...we'll see.
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#36
Play a member of Shiv's family. /sagenod.

Anyways, from what I remember of my RPs with Annabelle, you RP her pretty well. My only problem is the same as Redis'. Maybe she wouldn't be physically changed, but what about mentally? I find it hard to believe that being killed twice would leave someone as fine as she is.

You're also good OOCly. "Shivala, stop antagonizing the pet Human." Nice to talk to, not all dramatastic.
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#37
Danalthar Wrote:Play a member of Shiv's family. /sagenod.

Anyways, from what I remember of my RPs with Annabelle, you RP her pretty well. My only problem is the same as Redis'. Maybe she wouldn't be physically changed, but what about mentally? I find it hard to believe that being killed twice would leave someone as fine as she is.

You're also good OOCly. "Shivala, stop antagonizing the pet Human." Nice to talk to, not all dramatastic.

Oh, she's mentally changed. S'why she tends to be so comfortable around her undead mentor, or Itheros, or any number of undead. She gets flashes that she -is- still dead. And, in general feels that she doesn't quite belong on the living plane.
Also, you've never seen her during battle. She tends to...throw herself at stuff more, and is quite a deal more violent than she was. During a storyline I'm RPing with Lene and Arlyn, she got a little creepy taunting this big scary troll death knight.
Perhaps part of her wants to die again. And stay dead. Who knows.
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#38
Been a few months. Moar feedback. And yes, I know I need to play Marwaz.
Note: Annabelle has returned to being a priestess. It fits her better, she was never a true mele combatant, I know little of armor, she never should/could wear that gladiator's set I had her walking about Booty Bay in, and her mentor has left the server. You all know she looks awesome swinging that staff.
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#39
I like Annabelle. She's believable and sometimes gritty, without venturing into the grimdark trap of angst. She's likeable and good without being a Mary Sue, and flawed without being a repulsive, incompetent Anti-Sue. Her emotions are believable and humanizing, and it makes for some quite enjoyable RP: The girltalk with Antia in particular have been a lot of fun. I also quite enjoy how you make her idealistic and good, but not HERPA DERP SMITE EVIL. Good is not Dumb, after all.

Criticism-wise...let's see. Sometimes, your emotes can be short and rather undescriptive when in combat, and it breaks the immersion a little. "Annabelle jabs so and so with her staff, yay," is a little too Spartan in my well-esteemed and respected opinion; just give a little visual or something. You know, "Annabelle spins her staff into position and grasps it with both hands before sending a solid jab into Derpface's ribs."

While she does clearly feel both anger, fear, and pain, sometimes it's doesn't show well beyond very subtle signs. This is just nitpicking though, and it could simply be her character. It probably is, but I feel like I'm just gushing if I don't criticize.

This is really just so I can put in some token criticism though, so it's not terribly important.

OOCly, you are awesome. We shall be best buddies forevar, squeeee. You're fun to talk to, so refreshingly free of drama--and when you do get angry, you have the self-awareness to understand that you are annoyed,which I appreciate more than you can know.
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#40
Well, where to start. Better yet, what to say.

Well, I suppose I could start with a casual observation of Annabelle, seeing as she's a magnet for prestige characters. Though, I feel that bit has become a bit of a running gag at this point.

I will say that I have enjoyed RPing with you, as little as it may be. I always found Annabelle to be interesting enough. She seems to generally bring people together, in one way or another.
However, I found it a bit silly how she went from priestess to paladin and back to priestess and clearly forgot how to wear chain mail. I also found it interesting how she got all the BElf men and would chuckle as you lamented about it.

OOCly, I enjoy chatting with you. I also enjoy trolololololing peeps with you as well. :3

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